[請益] 一段句子是否正確
寫了一段文字
可是敝人現在正在當兵
怕腦殘了有些錯誤
奢求各位幫忙改正或給點建議,謝謝
It's actually funny that
people asking for something eternal,
but plunge themselves into a slightly space-time;
wishing to have someone
holding their crinkly old hands when the world collapse,
but wouldn't give a lightful care.
It's not about who's right,
but about who's left.
感謝大家
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