[文法] 一段自己寫的句子

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (hugh)時間15年前 (2010/05/09 17:03), 編輯推噓2(2030)
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As a matter of fact, considering the clients, being optimistic, and regarding customers as friends are the main three factors making him succeed. 想問一下這句到底哪裡錯了?? word判定為綠色波浪底線。 翻譯:就事實上來說明,體貼客戶、積極正向與視客戶為朋友是讓他成功的三大要因。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.39.28.208

05/09 17:27, , 1F
體貼客戶不是consider the clients...
05/09 17:27, 1F

05/09 17:27, , 2F
整個就不make sense,可能要請你說一下中文的意思是想表
05/09 17:27, 2F

05/09 17:28, , 3F
答什麼!
05/09 17:28, 3F

05/09 17:28, , 4F
可以用 cater for his clients
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05/09 18:09, , 5F

05/09 21:40, , 6F
being considerate to the clients. 感覺好像還可以
05/09 21:40, 6F
※ 編輯: hugh1682 來自: 61.227.136.36 (05/09 21:41)

05/09 21:42, , 7F
by5樓 所以我的consider沒錯吧= =a
05/09 21:42, 7F

05/09 21:43, , 8F
我的問題應該是在make這字上。前面該加個which還是說
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05/09 21:44, , 9F
making改成makes? 我重點問題是文法有錯嗎??
05/09 21:44, 9F
※ 編輯: hugh1682 來自: 61.227.136.36 (05/09 21:46)

05/09 21:44, , 10F
如果你是要講"事實上,體貼客戶,樂觀,把顧客當朋友是
05/09 21:44, 10F

05/09 21:45, , 11F
是使他成的三個原因"的話 應該寫成 As a matter of fact
05/09 21:45, 11F

05/09 21:46, , 12F
,being considerate to the clients, optimism, and
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05/09 21:46, , 13F
regarding customers as friends are the main three
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05/09 21:47, , 14F
factors making him succeed.
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05/09 21:47, , 15F
你也可以說 which make 都沒錯。
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05/09 21:49, , 16F
那我就making好了。不過為啥word會出現綠色底線? bug?
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05/09 21:50, , 17F
為這樣寫是因為考慮到parallel
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05/09 21:50, , 18F
因為 consider 不是那樣用的。
05/09 21:50, 18F

05/09 21:50, , 19F
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05/09 21:51, , 20F
錯是錯在consider 其實一樓就已經言簡意賅了
05/09 21:51, 20F

05/09 21:51, , 21F
是喔。 我是看這個的
05/09 21:51, 21F

05/09 21:54, , 23F
我看了四個意思,都沒有所謂的"體貼"啊,都是"考慮"的意
05/09 21:54, 23F

05/09 21:54, , 24F
思。
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05/09 21:59, , 25F
你不相信的話,改成considering the clients’ feeling
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05/09 22:00, , 26F
綠底就不見了。
05/09 22:00, 26F

05/09 22:06, , 27F
嗯~ 感謝。可能是我把think about感覺程有那方面意味存在
05/09 22:06, 27F

05/10 17:45, , 28F
are the main three factors making him successful?
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05/10 21:26, , 29F
make(使役動詞) 所以後頭加動詞
05/10 21:26, 29F

05/12 03:08, , 30F
word有辦法判斷原po的consider是否為體貼嗎?先不論意思
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05/12 03:08, , 31F
合不合原意,Word這樣判斷應該是錯誤的
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05/12 19:51, , 32F
word有聰明到去判斷使用者的文義嗎.....
05/12 19:51, 32F
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