[請益] 能否幫我改一小段文章...

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (~Halcyon Days~)時間15年前 (2010/05/16 11:38), 編輯推噓0(000)
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這是我自己寫的,但是總覺得有地方怪怪的, 可是因為本身英文不太好,所以還是不知道怎麼改... 希望版上的大大們能夠幫忙指點,謝謝!! ....(略) However, the same approach may work for different people at a certain time but may not work the next time; certain approaches may work for some people but may not work for others as well. To sum up, the most important thing for the manager to know when choosing an approach is that any technique may both advantages and disadvantages, so deciding which approach to choose could be hard. The only thing that the manager can do is to find a way with the best balance between advantages and disadvantages, and depend on more specific situations to make the final decision, such as cost, available resource, size and demographic of organizational members, long-term or short-term program, etc. 首先,不知道能不能先幫我看看是不是有很多文法錯誤... 再來就是不知道能不能幫助我改善英文表達, 我覺得我寫起來好像國小作文喔XDD 真的非常謝謝^__^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 98.230.25.254
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