[請益] 幫我看看托福文章

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (aws)時間15年前 (2010/07/23 18:02), 編輯推噓10(10038)
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The topic of teachers should assign homework to students every day or not can be approached from several different angles due to its complexity. Some people tend to agree that teachers should assign homework every day while others seem to disagree with it. In opinion, I agree that teachers should assign homework every day. First, assigning homework to students provides an opportunity for students to develop a habit of studying. It also helps students more competitive due to practice searching information by books or internet. The more information they acquire, the more competence they will have. Moreover, they can make a big progress by a discussion with classmate, and they exchange their idea and concept with each other. Second, doing homework is a process of accumulating knowledge. Doing homework can make students to know the main point in chapter with ease, and it helps students to review the chapter. For example, in the past, I have a bad academic performance due to confusing of the similar concept in chapter. I spend lots of time on noting and compare the relationship of concept. Thanks to homework assigned by teacher, I can tell the difference between similar concept, and I improve my bad grade. I do not prefer that teachers do not assign homework because the disadvantages of it are qualitatively greater than the advantages. I think the reason that I provide in the essay is stronger. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 122.118.34.162

07/23 22:57, , 1F
有什麼問題嗎?
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07/23 23:32, , 2F
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07/23 23:33, , 3F
托福作文三要素: 1.句子長 2.轉折語明確 3.用字深
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07/23 23:34, , 4F
掌握這三點就會高分.
07/23 23:34, 4F

07/23 23:35, , 5F
我是說真的喔..因為托福作文是電腦批改, 電腦會統計每句
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07/23 23:35, , 6F
的長度,作為評分標準之一. 句子越長越高分.
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07/23 23:36, , 7F
其次, 轉折語(first,second,moreover等)被電腦視為很有邏輯
07/23 23:36, 7F

07/23 23:37, , 8F
每段至少放二個轉折語,必得高分.
07/23 23:37, 8F

07/23 23:38, , 9F
電腦還會自動判斷你的用字深度,看是屬於哪個階級,
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07/23 23:38, , 10F
...我說真的喔 別以為我在毫洨..
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07/23 23:40, , 11F
托福作文就是用這種方式批改的..因為人腦無法消化考生文章.
07/23 23:40, 11F

07/23 23:40, , 12F
所有ETS的考試都是電腦批改(包括GMAT AWA)
07/23 23:40, 12F

07/23 23:41, , 13F
原波大致上符合高分要件,但有些文法細節有錯,好比說
07/23 23:41, 13F

07/23 23:42, , 14F
make students to know, exchange their idea,
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07/23 23:43, , 15F
稍微注意一下就好了.
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07/23 23:44, , 16F
我回一篇好了~
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07/24 00:20, , 17F
我一直以為是3-5人在改,然後取其平均...受教~
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07/24 00:26, , 18F
回T大..ETS自己承認是電腦改~
07/24 00:26, 18F

07/24 00:28, , 19F
不過他們的電腦軟體非常厲害 而且沒有人工閱卷的疲乏性
07/24 00:28, 19F

07/24 00:31, , 20F
"ETS自己承認..."-> 如果能提供souce就更好了...
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07/24 00:31, , 21F
(我是純好奇)我找到的: http://ppt.cc/zWnI
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07/24 00:32, , 22F
也許ETS有提供"輔助軟體"幫助graders(比如比MS Word更好
07/24 00:32, 22F

07/24 00:32, , 23F
的spell/grammar check) ...
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07/24 00:43, , 24F
那我應該去考一次,然後故意寫艱深過度的爛文章
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07/24 00:43, , 25F
看看會出來幾分
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07/24 00:45, , 26F
前幾年我棄TOEFL而考IELTS看來是正確的選擇~
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07/24 00:45, , 27F
回D大 ETS有發表研究報告 報告裡提到他們是電腦批改
07/24 00:45, 27F

07/24 00:48, , 28F
我之前有看過 要再找找~ 補習班老師也有說是電腦改
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07/24 01:03, , 29F
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07/24 01:03, , 30F
(PDF檔可下載全文)
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07/24 01:04, , 31F
托福作文是由ETS研發的"E-Rater"這個軟體批改的
07/24 01:04, 31F

07/24 01:05, , 32F
評分標準相當複雜,我提到的三個重點是其中比較重要的.
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07/24 01:10, , 33F
回T大,您說的一點都沒錯..托福作文的確是越難越高分,
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07/24 01:11, , 34F
而且內容真的不重要(不管你的論點夠不夠強硬)
07/24 01:11, 34F

07/24 01:11, , 35F
反而是陳述方式比較重要.
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07/24 01:58, , 36F
"幫我看看托福文章"-> 參考看看 http://ppt.cc/qKEf
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07/24 07:22, , 37F
第一次電腦改,第二次工改,兩次取平均,如果兩次差太多,
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07/24 07:23, , 38F
由第三人改............以上出處,改托福作文的老師..
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07/24 07:25, , 39F
我推文只是要說明n大的確是在豪小
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07/24 09:47, , 40F
E大說的是真的嗎?? 改托福作文的老師..是紙筆測驗的年代吧
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07/24 09:48, , 41F
有的老師也會豪洨呀 就像我看過補習班老師聲稱他是"
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07/24 09:48, , 42F
托福口試考官" ...(托福口說是電腦考耶,哪來的考官)
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07/24 09:55, , 43F
抱歉~我剛剛查到資料..的確是有人工閱卷 特此更正
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07/24 10:21, , 44F
恩,我的老師是在美國教英文的美籍老師,不是補習班老師
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07/26 23:35, , 45F
我剛剛逛到的: http://ppt.cc/vx8W 雖然不是ETS自己的官
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07/26 23:36, , 46F
文件,但是以內容來說倒是很合理
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04/29 16:39, , 48F
GOOD
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