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看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (pk)時間2年前 (2023/08/29 08:02), 編輯推噓2(2推 0噓 28→)
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想請教各位, 有個問題想請教您, 以下的這個句子是我自己造的: The citizens of that area have long ignored the threat of air pollution, causing their health to become worse year by year. 想請問: 1. causing 也可寫成 ,which causes; 指的是ignoring 這件事. (不知是否正確?) 2. 如果我想要說明的是 air pollution 這個現像, 那這在個句子中, 我要怎麼用關 代來修飾呢? (是不是就用 which causes; which 前面不加逗點, 不知是否正確) 謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 163.17.183.7 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1693267323.A.6C9.html
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which causes→which指的是air pollution
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1. Air pollution has long been ignored by the citizens
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of that region, which is causing their health to dete
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riorate.
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2. The citizens of that area have long ignored the thr
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eat of air pollution, a phenomenon that causes their h
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ealth to deteriorate over time.
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3. There has long been an apathy to the threat of air
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pollution, which is causing the health of the people i
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n that area to deteriorate year after year.
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4. The residents of that region have long ignored the
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threat posed by air pollution, a phenomenon which has
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led to a decline in their health over the years.
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5. This area's citizens have long ignored the threat o
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f air pollution, which is causing their health to dete
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riorate each year.
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6. There has long been an ignoring of the threat of ai
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r pollution in that area, which is resulting in worsen
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ing health conditions.
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7. Air pollution, the phenomenon that causes the citiz
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ens' health to worsen each year, has long been ignored
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by the residents of this area.
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8. There has been a longstanding disregard on the part
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of the residents of that area for the threat of air p
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ollution, which is becoming a more significant problem
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every year.
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9. Historically, the citizens of that area have neglec
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ted to address the threat of air pollution, a phenomen
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on that has aggravated their health over time.
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