Re: please help me to edit

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※ 引述《lynnljy (夏天曬成小黑人)》之銘言： : Please attach a one-page letter explaining why you want to study at UWRF. : (what should I write n title ?) I have edited what I can at the bottom : The most important reason why I want to study at UWRF : is to improve my English ability. : Since English is a common language in the world, : it plays a very important role in International Trade, : I believe that living one year in an English-speaking country : will helps me to make improvement to my self speedy. **** : Another reason to study at UWRF is the different field of knowledge, : even though Business Administration has corresponding parts : with International Trade, : there is still something I have not got in my major, : and I believe the knowledge of management is defiantly helpful in my future. I don't really understand this part of your application... what are you going to be studying at UWRF? what do you not have in your major? what corresponding parts does business administration have with International Trade? : The location of the campus is perfect, : it has the great small town atmosphere, : and suitable environment for studying. : Moreover, the campus is close enough to the Twin Cities, : provides entertainments places to go. : the states is multicultural, : I am sure there are students from all over the world in the states, : and I would like to make friends with people : who shares different cultures with me, : grow and learn with people from different places, : to increase my international view of vision. : A former exchange student told me the students : are never shy to ask any questions in class, : it’s quit different from classes in Taiwan, : I can train up my independent thinking and : learn to think outside of the box. : I have heard that people are very friendly : and easy to talk to in UWRF, : I can learn in more ways than I could image. : Therefore, I am looking forward to UWRF, : and I am ready to challenge myself. The main reason for my interest in studying at UWRF is improving my English skills. I am a student majoring in International Relations, and I believe improving my English abilities in this English speaking world will help me greatly with my area of study in the near future. **** The campus life seems ideal for my purposes - it is located within a friendly small community where much studying could be done. When time allows for me to travel to a more exciting entertainment district, the Twin Cities are not too far away from campus. Because the States is multicultural, I look forward to interacting with students from various backgrounds to learn and share each other's cultures. This serves as a chance to broaden my perspective on the world, and allows me to observe more of what it has to offer. So far, I have only heard stories of how much there is to both give and receive in an international exchange, and my imagination can only take me thus far. I wish to personally pursue this opportunity, and challenge myself in what I could grasp from such an experience. -- And what shoulder, & what art. Could twist the sinews of thy heart? http://www.wretch.cc/album/FoBenja -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.239.217