[Ask ] Please check my introduce

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (Bitch)時間16年前 (2009/11/25 20:10), 編輯推噓1(106)
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Nice to meet u. I am glad to be here for this interview. My name is Ozzy Chen,I am 25. I graduated from Chung Yuan University. My major is business administration. In my studying process I attended some activities and won some places in many competitions. I'm appreciate those activities let me have the precious experiences. I just left the army in July this year. In the past few months, I was an assistant in my father's company. I deal with the customers' data management, the network. Sometimes I have a business travel with my boss to China. My work is flexible; I can do anything when I am working even the mission i don't familiar with. i can learn it by doing. Now i hope my job is challengeable ,emphasis on improving my job skills. I have a serious and caring attitude when working, and when I start working I will do my best, and tell myself not to give up for the best results; And also, I will learn anything I don't understand from the people I work with, to make my interpersonal relationship better. I will arrange a time to make my professional and language skills better, to improve my second-special skill, and spend much time to read, let me have more chances to get new information. and I hope I can have some professional selling, planning, and business skills in the future. and have a big contribution for the company. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.163.91.201

11/25 23:47, , 1F
"Introduction" 你知道however.moreover,furthermore,
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11/25 23:48, , 2F
nonetheless,nevertheless,thus這些是什麼東西嗎=.=?
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11/25 23:48, , 3F
你的句子都幾乎是I~~~ I~~~ I~~~加點這些修飾會比較好喔
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11/25 23:54, , 4F
Subordinating Conjunction/Coordinating Conjunction
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11/26 11:38, , 5F
it is so my junior high student's intro. haham
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11/26 11:39, , 6F
Agree! try not to start with I in each sentence.
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11/26 13:38, , 7F
Try to write it in Chinese first and check it...
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