Re: [Ask ] Where can I post my writng?

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※ 引述《trueMhm (當個快樂的女孩，直接在M)》之銘言： : Dear all: I am new here,I really wonder is there any website that I can : post my writing and get some responses? : Here is my writing, if you got free time please check it and correct my : grammar. I appreciate your help. Thank you. : The Thing I Most Fear : The thing I most fear which is to be alone in daily life.I am an active fear the most is being alone everyday. outgoing : girl, I like to get along with my family and friends. To be alone is really Loneliness is something : a terrible thing for me.Indeed, I can’t image that I should make decisions or I cannot stand. making decisions on my own... : shopping on my own without any friend around me. I need to share my daily consolting with my friends first. : life, I need someone to comfort my bad emotions especially in midnight. with someone, and I need to have some peace and quiet especially... : No one can lead a hapy life without family or friends. The reason why I The only time I am : should be alone due to my work. I work from noon to night, most of my by myself is when I am at work, which goes from noon to midnight. Most... : friends feel asleep after I work.What’s more, it’s hard for young people friends are already asleep after my shift is over. Moreover, it's... : to get jobs in my hometown.With the reason that I mentioned, the only one way Due to above reason, : I can conquer my loneness just to move on with faith and work hard. To prove is to hold on to my faith and work really hard. : my decision is rightand seize the free time that I spend with my family and In time, I will prove that my way will grant me more free time to spend with those close to me. : friends. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.33.17.236