[Talk] My review of The Economist 3.12~3.18

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (不得安寧)時間14年前 (2011/04/01 04:49), 編輯推噓0(008)
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China's bamboo capitalism The bamboo capitalism refers to a capital operation way that rather different from the West's capitalism. It basically has three characters.First,the property privatization which reflect more than 90% of the China's 43m companies were private rather than that of three dacades ago when pretty much all business in China was controlled by one level of the state or another. Second, there is their dynamism. The number of registered private businesses grew at an average of 30% a year in 2000~2009. Third,it's their vulnerability.It is a wonderfully flexible system, but without a consistent rule of law. -- ╱ φ ψrod24574575 ◣ ╱ˍ▁▂▃▄▄▃▂▁ˍ gerogerogerogerogerogero /\ ◤ ∕ ﹨ ◤ /▅▆▅▇\ ∕ ◤ ◥ ﹨ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.162.73.129

04/04 14:25, , 1F
try to use shorter sentences. It's easier to see
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04/04 14:25, , 2F
your grammar mistakes.
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04/04 16:44, , 3F
If you learn about more reading texts, you will
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04/04 16:46, , 4F
find that my sentence's length are normal.
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※ 編輯: kerorolover 來自: 218.162.76.172 (04/04 16:47)

04/05 02:46, , 5F
your sentence length is normal for a native speaker
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04/05 02:46, , 6F
i routinely write sentences of comparable length or
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04/05 02:47, , 7F
longer, but the longer your sentences are, the
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04/05 02:47, , 8F
easier it is to make mistakes, hence my suggestion
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