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Parents need to care for their children,spending time to listen and respect their opinions,including taste of style,clothes,choice of friends and the one who will to accompany their rest of life.Parents should not treat their children as private properties.it is advised that parents should not to peek their children's diary and eavesdrop when theirs are talking on the phone. Above all..... It's there anyone can help me .... Appreciate for the kind person. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 36.224.229.218 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/EngTalk/M.1414428946.A.EC2.html
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