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Re: [Ask ] help me to correct my essay plz
推噓0(0推 0噓 0→)留言0則，0人參與, 最新作者safetoy (NOT GOOD ENOUGH)時間13年前 (2012/09/11 00:52), 編輯資訊
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Please take out the "which is suitable for me".. Usually employers will expect to hire some one who fits the job.. So it would be a bit odd to say fin
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推噓1(1推 0噓 6→)留言7則，0人參與, 最新作者author (AUTHOR)時間13年前 (2012/09/08 23:53), 編輯資訊
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"Such as ..." is not used in the beginning of a sentence to give examples.. The sentences can be modified to "During my school life, I got several. ex
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[Ask ] help me to correct my essay plz
推噓0(0推 0噓 0→)留言0則，0人參與, 最新作者Eisely (im tired of everything.)時間13年前 (2012/09/08 00:27), 編輯資訊
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im gonna post this on 104 human resource agency as my autobiography,. can someone help me to correct the mistakes? thx.... Hello, my name is Eddie. I
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