[寫作] 本月的一題AA 論點
看板GMAT (GMAT入學考試)作者wonderfulsea (不mind男孩)時間16年前 (2009/10/06 12:05)推噓0(0推 0噓 0→)留言0則, 0人參與討論串1/2 (看更多)
The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
"Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our
overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal."
這題是新題~之前有人問過翻譯了~
可是我想請問各位大大~這題有什麼地方可以WEAKEN呢?
看了半天~有點難想論點的說~><
麻煩有寫過的大大提示一下了
感激不盡
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