Re: [語文] 請教GWD修辭題

看板GMAT (GMAT入學考試)作者cbrf (人品)時間16年前 (2009/10/27 12:46)推噓1(1推 0噓 3→)

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: GWD3-Q4 : : A new hair-growing drug is being sold for three times the price, : per milligram, (as) the drug's maker charges for another product : with the same active ingredient. 先看看句意：一個新的生髮水要賣三倍價,每毫克, (as) (這個價錢跟) 製造商charge 另一件含有同樣活性成分的商品(的關係) 看看筆記倍數的用法： 1. three times as much/many as 2. three times the n. 3. three times what it is.... 4. three times bigger/higher than .. certainly, 比較的東西要平行 : A. as 沒找到 much/many as -> rule out : B. than 對像不平行 -> rule out 至此倍數的可能性就沒了，所以要趕緊想到可能不是考倍數用法，繼續看下去 : C. that 使用relative pronoun來說明the price 文法跟句意都可通 : D. of what 後面有一整個子句必須用that來開啟 : E. at which "at" awkward, 後面的charge 固定接for 不知道誰要at which : : * GWD解答: D : * PP解答: C : : : GWD5-Q10 : : (Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the : telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is) : precisely the opposite, a tool for communicating with a large, : public audience. : : A. Marconi's conceptioin of the radio was as a substitute for the : telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is : B. Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone, : a tool for private conversation, but which is : C. Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation : that could substitute for the telephone; instead, it has become : D. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a tool for private : conversation, a substitute for the telephone, which has become : E. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a substitute for the : telephone, a tool for private conversation, other than what it is, : : * GWD解答: E : * PP解答: C 看到instead和選項在此處作變化，我就先刪掉D E了因為沒有保留這個語氣 (conceive of "to be" 也不對片語是conceive of X as Y...) A的conception of ....was as.... akward 你翻成中文就知道了 C比B好的地方在於it有明確指代它用that讓第一句的主詞感明確用分號讓it明確要對應上一句的主詞 B的which我覺得會讓讀者不確定要說明哪一個就近原則是"a tool for private conversation" 但這樣會跟後面的句意不合這題不容易有請其他大大幫忙解釋、指正 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.119.232.107