Re: [SC. ] og-verbal review 2nd-sc104請教

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※ 引述《PoHsiang (畫下男人的停損點!)》之銘言： : 104. : Although the first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be : _____________________________________________________________________ : sighted was in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell, it had : _________________________________________________________________________ : not been announced until February 1968. : ______________________________________ : (A) Although the first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be : sighted was in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell, it had : not been announced until February 1968. : (B) Although not announced until February 1968, in the summer of 1967graduate : student Jocelyn Bell observed the first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed : star, to be sighted. : (C) Although observed by graduate student Jocelyn Bell in the summer of 1967, : the discovery of the first sighted pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed : star, had not been announced before February 1968. : (D) The first pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, to be sighted was : observed in the summer of 1967 by graduate student Jocelyn Bell, but the : discovery was not announced until February 1968. : (E) The first sighted pulsar, or rapidly spinning collapsed star, was not : announced until February 1968,while it was observed in the summer of 1967 by : graduate student Jocelyn Bell. : 想請教我的觀念與排除答案方法對不對 : 1.我先用時態排除,因為1967比1968早,因此時態上1967子句要用過去完成式 : 1968子句要用過去式,但是對等連接詞(and,but不用計較時態先後,需一致) : =>排除(A)(B)(C)(E) : 2.脫節=>排除(B) : 3.(A)裡面although裡子句缺被動語態分詞=>排除(A) : 4.while有對比與同時兩個意思,導致歧意=>排除(E) : 綜合以上,選擇(D) : 請問這樣分析正確嗎?尤其是時態排除法部分 : 謝 1. (A)：改變語義(the first pulsar was in…語義不對)，且過去完成式強調更早的時間，不適用1968。 2. (B)(C)：脫節=>排除 3. (E)：其實主要犯的是大家較不熟悉的Cohesion句子內部的連貫性英文句子句意要合理地表達事件順序發生所以選項D的OG詳解寫：The sentence presents the sequence of events clearly. 選項E：was observed 是先發生的動作，應該要比was not announced先寫。寫後面就會讓讀者讀不易懂，不優。同學可以參考：OV2-36題C選項也是同樣錯誤。 OV2-88題更是Cohesion的經典題哦。文法提點：兩個或兩個以上過去相繼發生的動作，用對等連接詞按動作發生的先後連接，此時用過簡，而不用過完。如果在談論過去的某一事件時，又想到在這之前已發生的某事，才用過去完成式。例如：PP2-107 題： Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609,that such an optical instrument had been made, he quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses. By 字神帝國康老師 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.47.19.76