Re: [SC. ] OG13 #102

看板GMAT (GMAT入學考試)作者dounts (忘記過去)時間13年前 (2013/04/25 15:39)推噓2(2推 0噓 1→)

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※ 引述《happysister (...)》之銘言： : 102.Yello jackets number among the 900 or sospecies of the world's social wasps : ,[wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist : almost entirely of] females- the queen and her sterile female workers. : (B)wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting : almost entirely of : (C)which means they lve in a highly cooperative and organized society,almost : all : (D)which means that their society is highly cooperative,organized,and it is : almost entirely : (E)living in a society that is highly cooperative,organized,and it consists : of almost all : 答案b, 想問一下E的錯誤點在哪,解答只是寫說it consists of沒有跟cooperative/ : orgainzed平衡,我是想說living in a society去修飾yellow jackets,然後it則是說明這 : 個society幾乎是由female組成這樣想可以嗎??? : 另外答案b,畫線前是wasps,後面又接,wasps也沒有甚麼連接詞會有流水句的問題嗎?? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 這當然不會有問題這叫同位語 For example: I live in Taipei, a city that is beautiful but crowded. 這裡的 city 只是重新敘述 Taipei, 後面動詞也並非 Working Verb並沒有流水句的問題另外根據句意這題後面的句子都是在修飾前句後面的 social wasps 如果用 living 可能會修飾到原句主詞 Yellow Jackets 根據我前面的 po 文: --------------------------------------------------------------- OG12 - SC - #1 The Glass House Mountains in Queensland, Australia, were sighted in 1770 by the English navigator Captain James Cook, (by whom they were named supposedly because its) sheer wet rocks glistened like glass. (C) naming them supposedly since their (D) who so named them supposedly because their (Answer) 如果確定修飾對象為前面第一個名詞時關代比 Ving 好 OG 解釋(C) "James Cook does not work as the noun that the verbal phrase beginning with naming can describe;" 所以 OG 是認定用 Ving 時不容易指代到前面的名詞 (或受詞 James Cook) --------------------------------------------------------------- 而正確答案 B 後面接的 consisting of 是直接接在名詞後面並沒有用逗號隔開所以不會有這樣的問題最後 it 在這裡的用法基本上在修辭一定有問題 1. 指代不清: 通常代名詞在主詞的時候，習慣性先找原題主詞但這裡指代的 society 位置不對 2. 多餘囉唆: 如果我用中文說"我住在台北，這裡有很多民族居住" 我想就不如說"我住在有很多民族居住的台北" 建議您多看一下 GMAT Manhattan 補充一下 OG 敘述不清的部分 -- Dounts GMAT 資訊小網站: http://ndxica.pixnet.net/blog -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.248.203.213 ※ 編輯: dounts 來自: 111.248.203.213 (04/25 15:39)