Re: [寫作班]第三週 Children Heights..., hereafter
※ 引述《hereafter (夜如何其)》之銘言：
: Children Heights at Different Ages
: Parents usually worry about the development of their children. If their
: children grow slowlier than others, they might have the question whether
^^^^^^^^應該是 more slowly
ly結尾的副詞，為了保留其副詞形式，
即使只有兩個音節還是用more...的型態。
: there are some physical problems on their children. For many years we have
我會用the question of whether their children have...
there be 的句型通常不會這樣用在人身上。
: focused on children development. Recently our research aims at children
: heights and provides some reliable height-age data for children.
^^^^應該是of
: Figure 1
: http://www.pixnet.net/photo/hereafter/70978058
: Figure 1 shows the clear height-age curve from age 0 to age 19. Obviously,
: the average height of boys was taller than that of girls until age 11.5.
: At the period between 11.5 and 13.5, girls led boys and then hardly increased
: their heights until age 19. This curve corresponded with the early evidence
: that girls' adolescence usually occured earlier than boys'. After age 14,
: boys still had a lof of potential in increasing their heights. However,
^^ typo
: due to the restriction of our research, there is no more evidence to show
: girls' heights might converge after age 19.
^^^^^^ 用converge的意思是？
: This data were surveyed on 5,000 boys and 5,000 girls. They were chosen
應該說Data of 5000 boys and 5000 girls are surveyed.
: from five major cities in the country twenty years ago. Each year their
: heights as well as health conditions were fully recorded.
Good job, keep working :)
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