[寫作班] 第一週 電腦

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (琉璃)時間17年前 (2007/11/10 13:54), 編輯推噓1(100)
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The modern society develops more and more is as necessary fast. The computer has become a somewhat essential item, which the people cannot be lacked. Both working and learning needs the computer assistance to achieve fast processing the affect. The computer’s developed fast, so persons all were used to talking by e-mail, MSN, YAHOO messenger etc. Persons have not enthusiasm and affinity anymore. At technology, person’s emotion and environment have to balance in all. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 58.114.8.48

11/15 22:31, , 1F
這一篇有太多的中文式的英文及文法錯誤.... 可以給建議嗎?
11/15 22:31, 1F
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