azure0116 寫作班 托福第二週-2

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (衝阿.炫風衝峰)時間16年前 (2008/02/24 10:53), 編輯推噓1(102)
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In everyday life, movies and tv programs might be one of the most commmon habbies for modern people. You may watch it anytime, anywhere, and without any risk. It's not only an activity for oneself, but you can appriciate it with friends and your family members. At the blank time of watching movies and tv programs, don't forget to have a short talk with your friends and your family members. That's a good chance to cultivate your relationship. It's also a good way to stranthen family bondage. We may have been influenced by movies and tv programs, because we saw it a lot. For example, we may learn some humarour words for a host of talkshow and say the words to our friends to create an interesting conversation. Moreover, we may change our ideas or life values by watching some significant movies or tv programs, for instance, I was touched by a movie "GOOD WILL HUNTING". I began to ponder what is the signifacance of my life. What is I'm going to do. It made my life more significative. Sit on the couch or sit on the sofa, and enjoy this simple pleasure.The catergories of movies and tv programs are a great deal; no matter how old you are, you may find your type and enrich you life. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.142.224.245

02/24 21:02, , 1F
spelling..hobbies, and shouldn't TV capitalized?
02/24 21:02, 1F

02/24 21:04, , 2F
^^ just a few suggestions.
02/24 21:04, 2F

02/25 02:35, , 3F
感謝樓上
02/25 02:35, 3F
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