Re: [寫作班] 托福第6週 kapolo 2

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者dvlin (Dee)時間16年前 (2008/03/26 04:32)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《kapolo (膚淺國度)》之銘言： : ※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之銘言： : : 五個題目選一個寫即可喔！ : : 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should : : sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific : : reasons and examples to support your answer. : Now is the rushing busy society. People are not sometimes but always doing ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^* "a rushing busy society" is not a common usage, but "a rushing society" is. Also, "now" is a time, but "society" is a place. Suggestion: "We are living in a rushing society." : the things they do not enjoy doing. Common people have to work all day for : salary, teenagers have to study for future work. No doubt most of us do *Okay, but are you implying that no one enjoys working, and no student enjoys studying? : things that we don't enjoy doing frequently. Should we do anymore that we : dislike? : We are struggling hardly for our need in the most time. Although someone hard* most of the time *"Hard" is both an adjective and an adverb. The adverb "hardly" has the almost opposite meaning of "hard". : may argue that his working is meaningful, we still have to pay the ^^^^^^^ : responsibility, tension, and attention at work. Maybe we can enjoy at work. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *Watch for correct verb/noun usage. "pay" attention, "hold" responsibility, "hold" or "endure" tension. : But we can not enjoy by work. We would choose another exercise if we can ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *This is quite a narrow-minded opinion. : relive from the bills. be relieved from : Students are in the society opinion that is studying for entering a higher : school. Students' badly competition for enter the top school makes them : studying day and night. I don't suspect they will enjoy learning with : pressure. *There are several grammar problems in this paragraph. Let me try to rewrite it, and tell me what you think. "Students in our society today are of the opinion that studying is only for entering a better school. Fierce competition makes them study day and night. I don't think they enjoy learning under so much pressure." : In conclusion, human have already spend too much time on making material "humans" spent xx or "human beings" : contentment, doing too many things we hate. People should sometimes do : things that they do enjoy doing rather than not. 有一點我想提出來跟你討論一下。這個題目裡的statement是 "People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing." 言下之意，預設的立場是，除了「有時候」以外的時間，應該都在做自己喜歡的事，而議題是「是不是也應該/必須做些自己不喜歡的事？」然而，你的個人立場似乎是說，無論如何，人們「總是」在做自己「不喜歡」的事，但是「有時候」也該做些自己喜歡的事？ -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 99.231.10.180 ※ 編輯: dvlin 來自: 99.231.10.180 (03/26 04:39) ※ 編輯: dvlin 來自: 99.231.10.180 (03/26 04:52)