Re: [寫作班] 托福第8週 happy1031-1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者dvlin (Dee)時間16年前 (2008/04/29 12:15)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《happy1031 (一泓清淺空明)》之銘言： : ※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之銘言： : : 五個題目選一個寫，請大家踴躍發表作文喔！ : : 1. Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you : : think it has changed people's lives. : : - airplanes : : Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. : The airplanes have brought dramatic changes to our lives over the past : decades. In the following essay, I aim to explain the reasons why airplanes : impact present world so much. : Form my perspective, one of the most significant effects that the invention from : of airplanes makes is the connections between two distance places. It was distant : almost unbelievable for the ancients to travel form one side of the earth to from : the other side. However, with the airplanes, people now can easily reach : everywhere globally. The business has not been limited in one country anymore xxx : Instead, overseas commerce has increased a great deal. Not only the products ^been ^by : but also the cultures are flow across each other.Worldwide chain stores like xxx ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^* *"products" don't flow across "each other" (other product) How about flowing across "countries", "borders", "oceans", "the sky", etc.? : McDonald's mushroomed in many areas where the people may alter their diet : habits. : Another major impact of the airplanes is less time for trips. It makes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^* *I suggest rephrasing to "decreased traveling time", for example. : possible for people all over the world to go to another place far away within : hours. Therefore, people do not need to spend a lot of time traveling. They : can meet each other or do goods exchanges much more conveniently. It ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ is *suggest: exchange goods : definitely a great impact to conservative trade and the pace of lives. : Without the speed, airplanes cannot play such major role in present even they ^if? : have the predominance of removed links between two nations. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ what does this mean? : In conclusion, what the airplanes effect on people's lives today is so huge xxxx ^' : that none can ignore it. When the Wright Brothers designed the first : airplane, people in the world step in a new era and their lives are not the stepped ^^^ were/have not been : same anymore. -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 99.231.10.180