Re: [寫作班] 托福第13週 verdammt, 1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者jennyQ (Jenny)時間16年前 (2008/06/12 19:22)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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You've done a good job! The article is filled with so many good examples. Here are some minor suggestions I'd like to say. ※ 引述《verdammt (flash hater)》之銘言： : : 2. What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, someone : : who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of : : these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and : : specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. : From my point of view, a friend in need is mentally essential, after all, : people can barely be endurant of being without friends in their lives. : As mentioned above, rational people would choose friends according to : their needs, or vaguely speaking, to the characteristics they like. For me, : reliability is the primal characteristic I would emphasize when making friends. : Between among all virtues of human beings, reliability is a basic indicator ^^^^^^^^^redundance : that tells you whether you can trust him or not, on things he says or does, ^and : reliability also requires honesty and effectiveness to some extent. : A true friend of mine must be reliable so that I can seek help from him or : her without worrying if I should turn to others, or telling secrets without : taking betrayl into consideration. I do not like people who lie or are not : capable of what they have promised and just eat their words later. because the eating x : behavior like this harm the friendship much and it leads to more distance harms ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ : between two people, because people estimate how much respect and intimacy can ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^I'm not sure about how to modify this and if it is right. : be laid on from his reliability, if someone is not expected of being serious a person's . If : about his words,should I be the one who still take it serious? I keep a : doubtful standpoint. : Intelligent people can be good advisers or might encourge your thirst for how about "inspire your eager?" : knowledge, a person with a sense of humor can help you release pressure from : daily work. It surely is even more lucky to have a friend with all good : characteristics, but the fact is that there is no perfection and we do not need : perfect people as friends, the very core of definiton of "friend" is someone : who understand you and is willing to share the life experience with you. closer : friends will do more for each other without calculating the pay back. Only with : someone you trust can fulfill the conditions above. : 不太曉得規格跟字數,如果有什麼錯誤的請多指教. I learn a lot from your article! TOEFL: 200 words. (not pretty sure, you can trace back posts on this board.) Between two paragraphs, there should be a blank line. Sorry for that I can just do little help for you. (〞︶〝*) -- Science is my religion Art is my soul -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.74.178.176