Re: [寫作班] 托福第14週 philjamy 5

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I admire your essays a lot! Here just little tiny help I can do for you. ※ 引述《philJamy (Jamy)》之銘言： : : 5. If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to : : study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific : : reasons and details. : If I had the opportunity to choose a subject I've never studied, I'd : choose economics. I'm interested in a subject that is both theoretical : and practical. Such a subject is not only helpful in daily life, but : also challenging. : The more I know about economics, the more I can achieve my goal- be : financially free. If I had such knowledge, I would know how to increase my : asset, and be rich in a few years. On the contrary,a person without ecnomical economic because economical = prudent or thrift : knowledge couldn't get the useful information and make the right decisions. : There are plenty of magazines and information about investment now. : Studying economics helps me to get rid of trash information, and then choose : the best one for me. : Secondly, mathematics, my favorite subject,is essential for studying : ecnimocs. I enjoy solving mathematical problems, which frequently appers economics appears : in economics. I believe that with my excellent math ability, I will gain : many successful experiences in economics. However, economics is also : theoratical. Therefore, there must be some fundemental but unsettled problems e a : which are quite challenging. I'm interested to learn more about this essential : issues, and apply them into pratical events. : In short, economics is a challenging and useful subject. If I could study : economics, I would sure to not only be interested in it, but benefit a lot. : Eventually, I would realize my dream, being a financially free man. : 心得：這題目真的很機車，我第一次寫根本想不出東西可以寫 : 第二次寫也是*@#....什麼是從來沒讀過的科目？ : 國語數學自然社會以外的都算嗎？@.@ I think there should be a lot of subjects you can choose from. And....if you don't know much about things other than your major, write your major.... I don't think the person who grade your paper would possibily know what you major in. (￣y▽￣)╭ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.74.179.97