Re: [寫作班] 托福第14週 mason, 1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者hsnudrum (寶寶加油喔!:))時間16年前 (2008/06/26 10:26)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《mason (牲牲不息)》之銘言： : : 1. Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy : : them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and : : examples to support your opinion. : I think a city should try to preserve these old, histotic buildings : rather than destroy them, even should preserve without any repair or : modification. These old renmants represent a history and culture of a : place. It can tell local citizens, their child and everyone come to this They children +who : town what the special event happended on this city or the developmental . : history of this place, which is help to let them understand the culture : of this town better and impressed. : For example, old KaoHsiung railway station which is a important spot of +the which刪掉 : history. KaoHsiung old railway station was been built on 1941, the end 1. spot of history-> historic spot 2. KaoHsiung old railway station-> It : of japanese goverance era. The age of building is 68 years. This building : has undergone and witness many important historical event, ex. February 28 Incident, witnessed : the 2nd world war, Formosa Boulevard Incident and so on. To preserve this : important spot, the goverment make a 85 meters shift without any : destroyed. : With the views which mentioned above, we can see the point why a : historic old building should be preserved. : ... don't know how to make a ending..... 一些文法上的建議, 參考一下 ^^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.4.234 ※ 編輯: hsnudrum 來自: 140.112.4.234 (06/26 10:28) ※ 編輯: hsnudrum 來自: 140.112.4.234 (06/26 10:28) ※ 編輯: hsnudrum 來自: 140.112.4.234 (06/26 10:39)