Re: [寫作班] 托福第14週 yihuan, 4

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※ 引述《yihuan (何不食肉糜)》之銘言： : Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that : daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details : to support your answer. : In today's world inundated with education from elementary school to ------------------------------- I don't know why to insist on using this expression to start an essay. It's pretty weird. @@ * English and Chinese writers start an essay very differently. Chinese writers would probably revolve around the topic they are discussing, and then gradually reach the points they want to talk about; English writers, however, are normally the opposite. They start by what they are going to say. : university, although some people believe that lots of assignments for : student are not beneficial, nevertheless, I see that the homework is a ------------- - dvlin has pointed out the problem: "although" and "nevertheless" are never put together in one sentence. : kind of training for student to improve their ability. The issue of students -------what ability? -------colloquial, not appropriate for writing. : practicing and confidence illustrate why it is so. ----------------------------------? : To begin with, everyone has the experience that we didn't do any exercise ^if we do not do... : and review our content in class; we would forget the knowledge or the the , : skills of solving problems which the teacher said easily. Moreover, some for xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx : subjects like math, physics, and calculus, it's almost impossible to you x are almost impossible to be : acquire the concept and skills just by listening in class without doing learned by just listening in class... : exercises by yourself. This situation is very similar to swimming and ourselves. : driving, you couldn't learn how to drive just by listening the driving we by just ^to xxxxxxx : coach tell you how to drive or watching lots of racing programs. You also xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx We : couldn't become a skilled swimming athlete by watching and looking without : wetting your body and practicing. That is why expert says" Practice makes our bodies experts say, "Practice : the perfect". That is why the assignments is very crucial for students. xxx perfect." xxx are : Additionally, another important reason for advocating homework is increasing ----------awkward verb : the study impetus and confidence. Although the process of doing homework is -------I think "motivation" may be a better choice. : very boring and exhausting, but when you figure out the answer of a very xxx * "Although" and "but" can never be put in one sentence. : difficult problem, the "stressed" process enable you to taste "desserts" ----------------------------------------------------- * awkward expression : , the desserts are confidence and impetus, you would get confidence and --commas are never put at the beginning of a line : impetus to solve other problems, the result would increase the desire of : studying definitely. In addition, the confidence is not only applied to xxx ----------------------------------? : the course in school but also has influence on a student's life. The reason --------------------? influences : is that the confidence would increase the self-esteem and grant students xxx xxx : the mental power to face any kind of jam in their life. No matter the course ---? lives -------------------- : problems or life problems, you solve the more problems, you would get more -------------------------? the more problems you solve, the more strength you would get. : strength. The homework would be the cornerstone of success. ------------------------------------------------awkward : In conclusion, enough homework is adequate to make sure that those students --------------- * Throughout the essay, "enough homework" or "adequate" amount of homework is seldom mentioned. It is therefore inappropriate to talk about enough homework at the end of the essay. : receive enough exercises in order to understand the content of textbook : totally. If teachers don't give any assignment to students, we could expect xxxxxxxx : that those students still feel confused about the knowledge which they : should know. Assign homework to students is an appropriate and clever ------? : method to improve students' ability. abilities For your reference. ^^; fleuve -- 然後有一天我ꄠ 靠在窗前，會發現原來我是株 ╭╮──╪──╭╮ 不＊ fleuve ＊需要陽光的植物︴1mK︴30m直到有一天我閉上眼睛 ╰╯──╪──╰╯ 看不見自己、卻可以看見你…ꄠ ♂ -- ※ 編輯: fleuve 來自: 118.168.40.70 (07/01 21:40)