Re: [寫作班] 托福第14週,pennyfrancis,2

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※ 引述《fleuve (:D)》之銘言： : ※ 引述《pennyfrancis (呸尼)》之銘言： : : Doing homework is plays an important role to students for learning. : "Doing homerwork" would not "play a role" in peoples' lives. : It is awkward to say so. @@ 不好意思那我想請問這句話我想表達說"做作業對於學生在學習過程佔很重要的部分" 該怎麼表達呢? : : As I see, most of students have laziness by nature.They do not review the : ^the -----------------------Chinese English "大多數學生對於學習都很懶散"該怎麼全是詮釋? : : books after school. Doning assignments will provide an opportunity for : Doing : : practice.It assists them to realize whether they fully understand the : : knowldege in the classes or not. : ^lacking verb (discussed, etc.) 這句話為什麼缺少動詞阿?前面不是有understand嗎? : : When I was an elementary school student, I prefered to watching catoons : preferred xx cartoons : : and playing basketball instead of reviewing books. But our teachers assigned : : much homework to us every day.Thus I could realize which sections I did not : . Thus : : understand through practice, and our teachers would teach us again and again : practicing : : on the next day. If it had no assignments, I would not have acquired more : --what does "it" refer to? : : knowledge and got better grades. : : As I grow up gradually, I noticed that my teachers would not assign as : grew ---------redundant. : Normal people wouldn't grow up "suddenly." : : many as homework to us. I think that the young chilren are too young to : much homework as before. : : understand how to manage their time. All they think about are playing. : is : : Therefore teachers assign homework to help young children who must to know : xx : : they can not just play all the day and must to study. : * Unidiomatic expression. : Better: : Therefore, teachers assign homework to help young childrem know they should : study and not just play all day. : : Eventually, I agree that teachers assign homework to students every day : ^should ^, : : especially young students. There is the best and fast way to absorb knowledge. : ^the This fastest : : Doing homework can help students to study better. : For your reference. ^^; : fleuve 謝謝你的修改,謝謝指教^^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.229.38.33