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3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks)
encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to
support your opinion.
I agree the statement that grades can encourage students to learn. Setting
marks could let students study more efficiently and effectively than other ways
of teaching. There are many reasons that I support that grades should be used
to teach students, and I will mention some important ones below.
It can not deny that other kinds of ways of teaching without grades also
inspire students. Moreover, someone argues that grades would make students
focus the results instead of process of learning. However, students might
loss the motivation to study hard. For example, when I studied in the graduate
school, I took a part-time job to teach sigh-language in a junior high school.
Because the school just wanted to plan a leisure activity for students,
students could pass the class without any effort. Consequently, some of the
students in that class had no interests to learn. Moreover, they often made a
lot of noise and interrupted the whole class. It frustrated me a lot, but I
had nothing to do. Therefore, I think grades do work to make students learn.
Using marks to encourage students can be a kind of incentives. Students will
learn hard to get high scores. At least, they will learn in order to pass the
course. Furthermore, grades also can be a kind of feedback. If they put a lot
of efforts to learn, high grades will give them a sense of achievement. On the
contrary, if they got low scores, they would study hard to improve it.
For example, when preparing the entrance exam of graduate school, I had spent
almost seven months and studied every day. I almost sacrificed all
entertainment to study. Finally, I got high scores in the exam and admission
into my first choice. At that moment, I was so happy just like I had own the
world. For those reasons, grades are good tools to inspire students.
To sum up, students will be inspired to study hard for good performance.
Though there might be some problems, such as overemphasizing on the results,
if we take a closer look, grades do bring students more benefits. As long as
the way of teaching could be made properly, marks absolutely are the "driving
power" to lead students’ learning.
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