[寫作班] 托福第16週 yihuan,4
Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team
or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support
your answer.
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Some people prefer to work independently, because you don't need to care
about other's consideration and you can control the whole things by yourself.
However, I think that it is more crucial to have the ability to done some
projects with others. In the essay, I will use cooperation and competition
as the reason to illustrate why it is true.
To begin with, in today's business, many commercial modes are not belonging
to specific field. Take IBM as an example, IBM was a hardware company, and
its major job is to sell the computers and servers to customers. However,
nowadays, IBM already become a computer integrated with hardware and
software business activities and its responsibilities are not only make
sure your hardware working well but also there is no conflict between your
hardware and software. For a person, it is very hard to deal with any kind
of problems in this business mode. Therefore, it is very important to work
with others and to finish a project. In IBM's example, my job may is
hardware engineer, it is definite that I must have some partners who know
how to solve those software problems. To help each other in a group is one
of the benefits from working with others, and they are impossible replaced
by work alone.
Additionally, I believe that most of people have a nature which is to excel
other people. For the reason, it is possible to do more and better in
order to prove your abilities in a group. For example, in a baseball team,
the relationship among every pitcher is not only cooperation in order to
make their time better but also competition for proving him making the
more contributions than others. In this case, every pitcher will try to
do his best in each pitching chance. The team is not the only one which gets
the benefits for this cooperation. All members also get the benefits which
are the motivations to improve their abilities. Many people call that the
situation is beneficial-competition. Although some competitions are harmful,
the beneficial-competition is really beneficial for group and members.
In conclusion, cooperation and competition seems to look like totally
different, but actually they can exist in the same time. It is the most
important advantages of working with others, and the advantages of working
with others are more than working alone. If we always work independently,
it is no doubt that we will have fewer motivations to improve our skills
or knowledge, our jobs or achievements are also limited by our abilities.
On the other hand, working with others is a more efficient and beneficial
way.
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