Re: [寫作班]托福第17周baimomo2030,2

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※ 引述《baimomo2030 (小草)》之銘言： : Have you never benefited from technology? Some people believe that : technology makes the whole world worse because it takes a lot problems. makes? : Nevertheless, I disagree it. I believe that technology has made the world a xx : better place to live. From my point of view, technology will help us to : transmit information and ascend our quality of life so that our life will be lives : more comfortable and more convenient than before. There are three reasons to : support my viewpoint. : First, computer technology makes massage transmit easier. As we know, message : internet plays an important role in our life. It can help us shopping, the Internet lives shop : contact the whole world and search any information what we want. For example, : my sister studies master degree in United States. She usually e-mail and ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^* ^^^^^^^^^^ *"studies in a master's degree program" or "pursues a master's degree"; better yet, use the progressive tense: "is studying in a master's degree program" or "is pursuing a master's degree" : skype contacts with us. Also, because of her university is in the ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^* *English is a living language and is subject to changes resulting from cultural influences. I believe the verb "to email/e-mail") has completely fused into our spoken and written language, even in a formal setting. Therefore, I think it's fine to say "She emails us." *Skype, on the other hand, only has about 300 million user accounts, and has a relatively esoteric community. Many people don't know of it, and "to Skype" isn't quite yet ready to become part of formal English. (unlike, perhaps, "to Google", meaning to search on Google.com) However, we commonly say "She calls us on Skype" or "She contacts us via Skype." : countryside, so she has to rely on the internet buying necessities. to buy : Second, electric equipments make life more comfortable. For example, Thomas : Edsion invented light bulb let human can have the light in the night. ^the ,so could xxx : Furthermore, the automobiles let human get everywhere faster than before. What : ’s more, air-conditioner let human feel more comfortable in the Summer. lets : Third, modern equipments help us to discover the natural resource which human x : rely on. For example, we use drills to discover the crude oil. Also, we use xxx : prone to find out whether Mars has life or not. a probe : To conclude, while many people think the technology hurt the earth. It causes xxx hurts by causing : the global warming and causes lots of animals endangered. However, I believe xxx endangers many species. : that some day in the future people will develop the technology to solve these : problems. Therefore, we should take optimistic attitudes to affront the : future. -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 70.79.36.70