Re: [寫作班] 托福第21週 soundspeed,2
※ 引述《soundspeed (myway)》之銘言:
: Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do
: you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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: Though working by hand can realize individual innovation and bring about the
: uniqueness of a person, I would prefer to work with machines. As an
: engineering student, I realize that there are many benefits to produce
: products with machines. Roughly speaking, machines exhibit better duration
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"longevity" or "endurance"?
: and could complete dangerous work not appropriate for human. In addition, one
perform dangerous tasks not suitable for a human
: booming industry could also push the development of technologies and
: economics. Following would explain the detail of my ideas.
: First of all, machines could work twenty four hours a day. This is impossible
: for human, since we need to sleep and to take a rest. If the mass production
"a human" xxxxxx xxx
or "humans"
: is needed for certain market, what we need is to build a production line.
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: Making use of machines also means that we human could save more time for
: entertainment, creation, or something we’re interested in. Someone may argue
: that this is not to save time for our human, but to enforce ourselves to take
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: more jobs. But, what if we live in a world without these tools and
: technologies? If I lived in a world without computers and interment, it would
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Do you mean "the Internet"?
: consume me a lot of time and money to send a message to a friend far away
: from my country. Then, I would have no time for my PS3 or WII.
: In addition, the development of technologies of machines or tools requires a
: lot of ideas and concepts. Only through cooperation and brainstorming could
: we push the technology to a higher level. Sometimes, it is this process
: somehow making our life better. For example, the development of semiconductor
: foundry in Taiwan also brings up the related IC industries, like package and
foundries xxx packaging
: equipment. They provide people here more jobs and selections.
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"a wider range of consumer products", to be more specific
: In conclusion, machines are tools for us to generate what we need in daily
: life. By making use of these tools, we can make products cheaper and more
: accessible. Then, anyone in the world could benefit from the innovation of
: some geniuses. Meanwhile, the by-product of using machines is the evolution
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("added benefit" carries a more positive connation)
: of our technologies and knowledge, which make our future better.
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