Re: [寫作班] 托福第21週 soundspeed,2

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (Dee)時間16年前 (2008/09/21 11:29), 編輯推噓1(100)
留言1則, 1人參與, 最新討論串2/2 (看更多)
※ 引述《soundspeed (myway)》之銘言: : Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do : you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. : ===== : Though working by hand can realize individual innovation and bring about the : uniqueness of a person, I would prefer to work with machines. As an : engineering student, I realize that there are many benefits to produce : products with machines. Roughly speaking, machines exhibit better duration ^^^^^^^^ "longevity" or "endurance"? : and could complete dangerous work not appropriate for human. In addition, one perform dangerous tasks not suitable for a human : booming industry could also push the development of technologies and : economics. Following would explain the detail of my ideas. : First of all, machines could work twenty four hours a day. This is impossible : for human, since we need to sleep and to take a rest. If the mass production "a human" xxxxxx xxx or "humans" : is needed for certain market, what we need is to build a production line. ^a : Making use of machines also means that we human could save more time for : entertainment, creation, or something we’re interested in. Someone may argue : that this is not to save time for our human, but to enforce ourselves to take ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^? : more jobs. But, what if we live in a world without these tools and : technologies? If I lived in a world without computers and interment, it would ^^^^^^^^^ Do you mean "the Internet"? : consume me a lot of time and money to send a message to a friend far away : from my country. Then, I would have no time for my PS3 or WII. : In addition, the development of technologies of machines or tools requires a : lot of ideas and concepts. Only through cooperation and brainstorming could : we push the technology to a higher level. Sometimes, it is this process : somehow making our life better. For example, the development of semiconductor : foundry in Taiwan also brings up the related IC industries, like package and foundries xxx packaging : equipment. They provide people here more jobs and selections. ^^^^^^^^^^ "a wider range of consumer products", to be more specific : In conclusion, machines are tools for us to generate what we need in daily : life. By making use of these tools, we can make products cheaper and more : accessible. Then, anyone in the world could benefit from the innovation of : some geniuses. Meanwhile, the by-product of using machines is the evolution ^^^^^^^^^^ ("added benefit" carries a more positive connation) : of our technologies and knowledge, which make our future better. -- 一個 學術英文寫作 領域的討論板 在 PTT (telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分組討論區 】 --> 11 國家研究院 政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 70.79.36.70

09/28 12:34, , 1F
Thanks for your correction. QQ
09/28 12:34, 1F
文章代碼(AID): #18rR-sEZ (ST-English)
討論串 (同標題文章)
文章代碼(AID): #18rR-sEZ (ST-English)