Re: [寫作班] 托福第26週 libraghost 1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者S8972616F (COELACANTH)時間16年前 (2008/12/07 16:09)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《libraghost (無腦熱血控)》之銘言： : 1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more : important for students to study history and literature than it is for : them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and : examples to support your opinion. : ---------- : I favor that students study history and literature.Because it is a positive I favor the idea that students should study...more than...because they : thing to study more.In face,I think history,literature,science and induce positive thinking in us. (don't understand this sentence) : mathematics is as important as.The following reason is why I think that. (My arguments are as follow.) : In the first part,generally speaking most of students who study science and Firstly, it is a common belief that a science student earns more than an : mathematics usually gain money more.It is the reason why everyone's arts student. It is also why every parents... : parent ask their children study science and mathematics. However,is it a truth? ^to (I beg to differ) : Not all. If we look down on literature,we would look like a person who has no (cancel not at all) (become) : temperament. Even if we have a lot money,it would difficult satisfy our (??) ^of (will hardly satisfy our inner wants) : spirit. If we look down on history, we would no way to avoid mistake that had will never learn from the mistakes that : happened. When we are in a puzzle,we would not knowledge how to solve had happened in the past, nor will we have the knowledge and solutions to problems : the question. should we face one. : In the second part,if we make muck of history and literature ,and overlook (Secondly, if we deem history...as chaff and over-emphasize on...,then..) (btw to overlook means to neglect) : science and mathematics. Maybe we have a satisfactory spirit,but would not (do not understand this sentence) : find an excellence job.The world is actual,people often comment other's worth (In a dog eats dog world,...) (measure/gauge) : by their salary,and The job decides the salary. Although we don't need live in (which is determined by one's job) (do not) ^to : other's opinion, but it affect indeed our life. (other peoples' opinion, it indeed affects our life) PS: This part is a bit far fetched and no longer link to the topic. : To sum up, no matter history,literature,science and mathematics is. no matter whether it is science or arts, they deserve equal : All of they have a value to study. Learning knowledge has not to purchase emphasis as they possess distinctive values. We do not learn for the sake of... : a result.Because we never knowledge what necessary is,or not? However,having ^but for... (don't understand) However, the : earned knowledge can become your property.Maybe a day in future,the knowledge learnt knowlege will become one's valuable asset. Maybe one day in the future.. : that be thought useless by you can become the useful advice. that was thought to be useless can become an useful advice. : ----------- PS: Again your conclusion is out of topic. : 我覺得內容蠻差的，想法很沒深度 : 還有文章中一直用if : 文法方面希望有人可以幫忙訂正 : 感謝 You need to improve your content and link back to the question. Grammar-wise you need to avoid fragamented sentence. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 222.164.52.87 ※ 編輯: S8972616F 來自: 222.164.52.87 (12/07 16:12) ※ 編輯: S8972616F 來自: 222.164.52.87 (12/07 16:35) ※ 編輯: S8972616F 來自: 222.164.52.87 (12/07 16:37)