Re: [寫作班] 托福第28週 grazzilybear

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※ 引述《grazzilybear ()》之銘言: : ※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之銘言: : : Choose one of the following topics: : : 1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's : : childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the : : most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and : : examples to support your answer. 有人幫我改了 所以我po上來 (等一下重寫過後 在po上來 大家一起改 > <) ============================================================================== 1. 寫作時 請僅描述一個重點 2. 分三段就好 第一段 introduction 3. 第二段 main argument 4. 第三段 結論 此三段都要緊扣一個主題 不要同意跟不同意都講一點 : A person’s childhood years are for body and mind growth. The development : of children in their childhood years is almost from the family and : environments. I think a person’s childhood years are important years of I think~~是不漂亮的贅字 : a person’s life. Many people learn some stills in the childhood years, : such as playing piano, painting, writing stills and some sports. Many : successful basketball players or baseball players were trained well when : they were children. People always say when you grow up you can never learn : how to play piano. So better let your children contact with music. : I just describe the good situation how about the bad condition of life. : Children can not judge the thing people teach them. If you teach them the : right thing to do, they will do the right thing. In the same way, they would : learn the bad behavior easily in the unhealthiness childhood. : But, I think childhood years are not the most important years in every : person’s life. Many children can play lots of musical instruments because : the parents told them to do. When they grown up, most of them are not : musician or composer. What I mean is anyone can choose their own life style. : However, it may not be easy for everyone to change the present life to : become an appropriate life you want. Especially when the children grow up in 不是一個句子 : bad environments or without the right education. Even through, many great : people still can complete the amazed works. Like Lincoln from a poor family ------Amazed嚇到的 Amazing驚人的 Like不能開始一個句子 : but become a president of America. We can not evaluate people only on : childhood years because the potential of human beings is always surprised. : : 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should : : be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do : : so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. : : 3. Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other : : high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of : : these school policies do you think is better? Use specifc reasons and : : examples to support your opinion. : : 4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is : : fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your : : opinion. : : 5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools : : should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. : : Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. : : Happy New Year to all. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.109.90.199

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02/08 04:43, 1F
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