Re: [寫作班] 托福第28週 grazzilybear
※ 引述《grazzilybear ()》之銘言:
: ※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之銘言:
: : Choose one of the following topics:
: : 1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's
: : childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the
: : most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and
: : examples to support your answer.
有人幫我改了 所以我po上來 (等一下重寫過後 在po上來 大家一起改 > <)
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1. 寫作時 請僅描述一個重點
2. 分三段就好 第一段 introduction
3. 第二段 main argument
4. 第三段 結論
此三段都要緊扣一個主題 不要同意跟不同意都講一點
: A person’s childhood years are for body and mind growth. The development
: of children in their childhood years is almost from the family and
: environments. I think a person’s childhood years are important years of
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: a person’s life. Many people learn some stills in the childhood years,
: such as playing piano, painting, writing stills and some sports. Many
: successful basketball players or baseball players were trained well when
: they were children. People always say when you grow up you can never learn
: how to play piano. So better let your children contact with music.
: I just describe the good situation how about the bad condition of life.
: Children can not judge the thing people teach them. If you teach them the
: right thing to do, they will do the right thing. In the same way, they would
: learn the bad behavior easily in the unhealthiness childhood.
: But, I think childhood years are not the most important years in every
: person’s life. Many children can play lots of musical instruments because
: the parents told them to do. When they grown up, most of them are not
: musician or composer. What I mean is anyone can choose their own life style.
: However, it may not be easy for everyone to change the present life to
: become an appropriate life you want. Especially when the children grow up in
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: bad environments or without the right education. Even through, many great
: people still can complete the amazed works. Like Lincoln from a poor family
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Amazing驚人的
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: but become a president of America. We can not evaluate people only on
: childhood years because the potential of human beings is always surprised.
: : 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should
: : be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do
: : so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
: : 3. Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other
: : high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of
: : these school policies do you think is better? Use specifc reasons and
: : examples to support your opinion.
: : 4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is
: : fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
: : opinion.
: : 5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools
: : should allow students to study the courses that students want to study.
: : Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
: : Happy New Year to all.
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