Re: [寫作班] 托福第30週 hahahao, 2

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※ 引述《hahahao (皓)》之銘言： : 2. Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment : building? : =========================================================================== : A garden paved with grass, without the steels separate the sky, that is the ^^^^^? separating What are "steels"? Do you mean "steel structures", "steel beams"? : first sight came to my mind when I think of the traditional house. I would ^that comes : prefer to live in a traditional house just as I would prefer to choose a : place having fewer rules to obey. which has : A traditional house can display exterior look that is designed by ^an : inhabitants, which may be limited in a modern apartment building. I could ^its : freely change the color and materials of the walls outside the house, : deciding where to construct a window if I lived in a traditional house. : It is : the traditional house that can provide people a unique and characteristic : living place. The regular appearance and the same style of each apartment : layer are modern apartment buildings’ features. Obviously, there is less : free for residents to show their own cultures. freedom : Moreover, the traditional houses are usually less crowded than the modern : apartments. A modern apartment building, in my opinion, it is like a small xx : cell of a comb. Many modern apartments may have a balcony besides the living ^^^^ honeycomb ('comb' has many meanings and is ambiguous.) : room, but the balcony is usually much smaller than the garden of a : traditional house. It can’t be paved with grass or soils for the reason of soil that : it may cause downstairs to water leakage. Needless to say that people should cause (water) leakage downstairs. : pay much attention to the drips or even the soils falling from the potted : plants, which are hung on the balcony, to the passers-by. The small habits or : behaviors of residents may affect their neighbors much more than them of the : traditional house. For instants, people can’t dance in their apartment, or instance : the footsteps will bother the residents of downstairs. : After a tired work in the school or office, people go home for a rest. I ^day of ^the : would feel more unconstrained in a traditional house than in a modern : apartment. I can freely do sport such as aerobic dancing to relax my mind sports : without fear of bothering neighbors. When I see the house’s appearance that ^my : designed by myself, the pleasant feeling and satisfaction burst from my mind ^is ^^^^^ 'that/which burst' or 'bursting' : can remove all my tiredness. That‘s why I prefer to live in a traditional : house. -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 24.83.235.248