Re: [寫作班] 托福第31週 ynyn, 3

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※ 引述《ynyn (為何總是不順利...)》之銘言： : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is : bad for children. : A: : Today, television is a common technological product around the world. So many ^the; same below : people regard television as their live, especially for children. Although not lives xxx : all channels of television is bad for children, some channels still harm xxxxxxxxxxxxx are : children deeply in their childhood. Government should prohibit these The government : inappropriate show or channels. shows : In the competitive TV market, many companies create very inappropriate show : such as violent show, blood show and criminal show in order to attract shows; : teenagers and adults. The show would resort children’s mind even their live. ^^^^^^ minds lives I think you mean "distort" : According to several reports, many crime behaviors are caused by teenagers criminal (adj.) : who love to watch these violent programs. Some psychologists point out these : shows would keep in children’s mind deeply. Thus, decreasing children to or "preventing children from" : watching these programs is necessary. : In addition, take education and family for example, so many children go back : to home soon after classes because they want to watch their favorite show. xx : Children usually decrease their time to do some excises and activities even doing , 'to do' vs. 'doing' Decreasing their time to do something: 減少(其他的)時間，用來做某件事情 Decreasing their time doing something: 減少花在做某件事情的時間 : homework. Thus, now, so many children have the overweight problem. Also, weight problems : children spend too many time to watch TV including meal time and their free , : time. They forget to maintain the relationship of their family. Parents do with ^^^^^^'neglect' is a more suitable word here : not know not only what happened in children’s school time, but also how to happens ^their : help children when they have some problems. ^their; or simply 'them' : Decreasing these inappropriate shows is very important issue for government. ^a ^the : The shows and channels would influence children’s live deeply. Thus, lives : children should not watch the shows but spend more time to do living ^should ^^^^^^ : activities. What's a 'living activity'? Perhaps simply 'other activities' here? -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 24.83.235.248