Re: [寫作班] 托福第31週 citc 2

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※ 引述《citc (leo)》之銘言： : : 1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games : : teaches us about life. : ___________________________________________________________________________ : Whether adults or children, people like to play games, including video games, : sport competition, even the outside exercises. The different activities have competitions xxx outdoor : distinct meanings depend on people. Some people think that children play depending on the individual playing : video games can lead to develop the ability such as quick responses, logical developing abilities reflex x^and or 'development of abilities' : thinking. However, some people consider the negative effects that it is to other(to avoid repetition of 'some' , xx : waste time that playing games because they are hardly manage their time and a waste of time to play games ^^^^ xxx children : distract from studying or working. For me, I believe that playing games have are distracted : the constructive benefits to life because there are three reasons following. , and Using "because" here is incorrect, because the simple fact that 'there is some number of reasons written somewhere' doesn't support your argument; what supports your argument is 'what those reasons are'. : First of all, playing games help us to advance skills in the field of ^^^^^^^^^^^^ : interests. many fields of interests specific fields of interests : Whether specific campaigns or ordinary games not, I can know persons that xxx meet people who : have : the common interests. In this process of competition, we can understand our xxx Through : level and have the chance learning from opponents or peers. This is a ^^^^^ to learn ^our an or 'abilities' : inspirable method to purse the advance and surpass ourselves in comparison inspiring pursue : with that of past time. : Secondly, playing games develop the attitude and spirit of sportsman. In the ^helps us ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 'sportsmanship' : competition, some people would win, whereas other people would be lost the ^^^^^^^ xxx lose : game. People posses the opportunity to express the good manner with each xxx possess (or just 'have' (their) manners : other. : Thus, that we learn to how to respect with each other can lay the fundamental xxxxxxxxxxxxx Learning how to xxxx xxx lays : attitude in the society. : Thirdly, people unconsciously cultivate personality through games. Some games ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (^playing) a commonly used phrase is 'build character' : need people to cooperate and organize the skills of everyone. The attitude : and the thoughts would impact the result of teamwork. For example, someone ^^^^^^^^ ideas, thinking, process : that who : prefers to express himself without caring about others' opinions is unpopular : and affects the efficiency that team can not make the final decision. reduces of the team to make decisions. : Similarly, the situation will occurred in the future working environment, occur in the workplace in the future, and : people have more chances to have the conflict. ^will ^^^^meet, face : In the end, playing games have variety of advantages than negative effects. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Here, you are trying to merge two sentence structures into one sentence. 1. Playing games has a variety of advantages. 2. Playing games has more advantages than negative effects. I think number 2. is closer to what you mean. : My point of views are that playing game is the platform to mold personality, view is games a : to progress and learn quickly. Therefore, I agree that playing games can ^to : teaches us about life. teach -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 24.83.235.248