Re: [寫作班] 托福第43週(5)
※ 引述《weiqi (我找不到出口)》之銘言：
: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
: Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event)
: is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.
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: Attending a live performance or watching the same event on television are
: both joyful entertainment in the modern world. I prefer to watching it on
: television rather than attend a live-show, because it is more convenient,
attending (或是 to attend ?)
: comfortable and safer.
: First of all, attending a live performance means that I need to go out for it,
: and dressing up suitable clothes is always bothersome to me. Making up still
意思會混淆
我想應該是說 To use makeup 或是
To put on makeup吧 不知道各位大大覺得應該怎麼寫比較好
: taking some time. And besides I should check the bus schedule or otherwise
takes Besides, need to
: driving on my own after I could previously find the nearby parking lots in
因為前面有should 這邊要寫的話要用drive on
這句最好重新編排，不過今天太晚了 明天再來幫你想...
: the Internet. Consequently, instead of going out for the live-show, watching
: television on the same performance is more convenient to me.
watching the same performance on the television
...以下恕刪
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