Re: [請益] 請問這樣的CV可以嗎

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終於看到正式的英文履歷格式 幾個地方注意一下 交流交流 為方便比對我直接在原文底下註記 我是根據HBS的標準CV格式來給建議 記得維持在一頁版面就好 1.格式上可以這樣編排 time background Location 把時間軸放在最左端可以讓人比較清楚知道經歷 藏在本文中不太清楚 ※ 引述《moonjala (結了)》之銘言: : xxxxxxxxxxxx : xxx@xxxxx : +886-xxx-671-731 or +886-2-xxxx-4150 : Education : CUNY, Baruch College, Zicklin Business School, Taipei branch, Executive : Master of Science in Finance, will graduate of 2010. : National Taiwan University, Economics major, Class of 2006 台大的學歷要加上 bachelor, xxx department 什麼學校什麼系拿學士 什麼學校什麼所拿碩士 這種東西是一翻兩瞪眼的東西 要寫清楚 : PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCES : Yuanta Securities, Brokerage Department : Sales Representative, 05/2009~now : Delivering TAI-Stock, HK-Stock and US-Stock information for clients. : Be consultant as iShares ETF, global ETF, and mutual funds. : Maintain more than 0.003% market share, include institutes and individuals. : ELN, CLN and REPO broker 所有句首動詞型態一率用過去式 除了一般性的敘述外, 請把competence寫出來, 業績能加上數字最好 我隨手舉個例子 Account Development and Customer relationship Management: Developed 20+ accounts and maintained 50+ accounts, AUM up to 5 million USD 當然 這要看你工作內容而定 如果就你字面上的意思來看 delivering xxx information for (or to?) clients 我會直覺是快遞的工作 我這樣比喻可能不太恰當 但是原po應該明白我的意思 抓大重點~太瑣碎的東西就不用寫了 之後的工作經驗描述也要注意這點 : Manulife Insurance Co. : Financial Planner. 06/2008~04/2009 : Using investment policy to design wealth transfer plan for family. : Using regulation benefit to design enterprise to stay just plan. : Gathering different financial tools to make retirement plan. : Expanding policies to create property preservation plan. 一樣 句首動詞全改為過去式 有些東西最好用專有名詞 例如wealth management 這樣一說人家都知道你在說什麼 不然會有拉里拉雜的感覺 : First Financial Holding-Offshore funds Dep. : Assistant Manager, 11/20007~04/2008 : Supervisor: Danny Wen, Vice President : Cooperate with Northern Trust invest plan. : Promote Manager of Mangers funds in Taiwan. : Writing news for Northern Trust products and daily, weekly main financial : markets reports. : Negotiator for controlling budget and PR face to media. 句首動詞全改為過去式 : INTERNSHIP EXPEERIENCES : American Chamber of Commerce in Taipei, Taiwan : Project Assistant, 01/2005-03/2006 : Supervisor: Dr. Richard R. Vuylsteke, C.E.O. : Achieved the best advertising sales record, 115 companies, for AmCham’s bingo! 這一段就很棒! 句法對 也有數字佐證 : Membership Directory.(07/2005~09/2005) : Participated in AmCham’s signature events, including HNF(政府謝年飯), : White Paper, and World’s Best Advertisement . : Taiwan Tonichi Risk Management Co., Taipei, Taiwan : Summer Intern, 07-08/2003 : Supervisor: Yu-Chang Lin, President : Performed technical analysis on Taiwan’s industrial and financial market : Issued daily, weekly, and monthly reports with respect to TAIEX activities : HONORS : Exceptional Talented Student in Biology, Academia Sinica : Taipei, Taiwan, 10/1998 : L’Oreal Global Business Game Ranked NO.3 in Taiwan : Taipei, Taiwan 03/2005 : PUBLICATIONS : ,2008,How to see through fake offshore police. P.66~68 Money+ : 11th 2008 : , 2006: New Derivatives and Taiwan’s Nasty Elections: Prospects : of Neuroscience, Politics and Finance. In Preparation. : . 2003: RMB Revaluation and Taiwan’s Industry: Effect and : Options. Tonich Monthly Report, Sep., : SPECIAL MEMBERSHIP : American Chamber of Commerce in Taipei-Young Professional of Asset Management : Member : LICENSES : Senior Securities Specialist : Investment-oriented insurance representative : FAMILY MEMBERS RELATED JOB : BROTHER : Senior Officer : Taipei Economic and Culture Representative Office (2001~) : BROTHER Ph. D in Environment Computer Science, JHU : Part-Time work in NASA, IBM Super computer center (20 後面有些亂 可能沒貼全吧.. ※ 編輯: CLOSED 來自: 117.79.64.84 (12/16 12:07)

12/16 12:08, , 1F
不知道原po為什麼刪文 提了一些建議然後沒說謝謝就刪文
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12/16 12:09, , 2F
讓人感覺很沒有禮貌 現在的學弟妹都是這樣的嗎?
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