Re: [請益] 請問這樣的CV可以嗎
終於看到正式的英文履歷格式
幾個地方注意一下 交流交流
為方便比對我直接在原文底下註記
我是根據HBS的標準CV格式來給建議
記得維持在一頁版面就好
1.格式上可以這樣編排
time background Location
把時間軸放在最左端可以讓人比較清楚知道經歷
藏在本文中不太清楚
※ 引述《moonjala (結了)》之銘言:
: xxxxxxxxxxxx
: xxx@xxxxx
: +886-xxx-671-731 or +886-2-xxxx-4150
: Education
: CUNY, Baruch College, Zicklin Business School, Taipei branch, Executive
: Master of Science in Finance, will graduate of 2010.
: National Taiwan University, Economics major, Class of 2006
台大的學歷要加上 bachelor, xxx department
什麼學校什麼系拿學士 什麼學校什麼所拿碩士
這種東西是一翻兩瞪眼的東西 要寫清楚
: PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCES
: Yuanta Securities, Brokerage Department
: Sales Representative, 05/2009~now
: Delivering TAI-Stock, HK-Stock and US-Stock information for clients.
: Be consultant as iShares ETF, global ETF, and mutual funds.
: Maintain more than 0.003% market share, include institutes and individuals.
: ELN, CLN and REPO broker
所有句首動詞型態一率用過去式
除了一般性的敘述外, 請把competence寫出來,
業績能加上數字最好
我隨手舉個例子
Account Development and Customer relationship Management:
Developed 20+ accounts and maintained 50+ accounts,
AUM up to 5 million USD
當然 這要看你工作內容而定
如果就你字面上的意思來看
delivering xxx information for (or to?) clients
我會直覺是快遞的工作
我這樣比喻可能不太恰當 但是原po應該明白我的意思
抓大重點~太瑣碎的東西就不用寫了
之後的工作經驗描述也要注意這點
: Manulife Insurance Co.
: Financial Planner. 06/2008~04/2009
: Using investment policy to design wealth transfer plan for family.
: Using regulation benefit to design enterprise to stay just plan.
: Gathering different financial tools to make retirement plan.
: Expanding policies to create property preservation plan.
一樣 句首動詞全改為過去式
有些東西最好用專有名詞 例如wealth management
這樣一說人家都知道你在說什麼 不然會有拉里拉雜的感覺
: First Financial Holding-Offshore funds Dep.
: Assistant Manager, 11/20007~04/2008
: Supervisor: Danny Wen, Vice President
: Cooperate with Northern Trust invest plan.
: Promote Manager of Mangers funds in Taiwan.
: Writing news for Northern Trust products and daily, weekly main financial
: markets reports.
: Negotiator for controlling budget and PR face to media.
句首動詞全改為過去式
: INTERNSHIP EXPEERIENCES
: American Chamber of Commerce in Taipei, Taiwan
: Project Assistant, 01/2005-03/2006
: Supervisor: Dr. Richard R. Vuylsteke, C.E.O.
: Achieved the best advertising sales record, 115 companies, for AmCham’s
bingo! 這一段就很棒!
句法對 也有數字佐證
: Membership Directory.(07/2005~09/2005)
: Participated in AmCham’s signature events, including HNF(政府謝年飯),
: White Paper, and World’s Best Advertisement
.
: Taiwan Tonichi Risk Management Co., Taipei, Taiwan
: Summer Intern, 07-08/2003
: Supervisor: Yu-Chang Lin, President
: Performed technical analysis on Taiwan’s industrial and financial market
: Issued daily, weekly, and monthly reports with respect to TAIEX activities
: HONORS
: Exceptional Talented Student in Biology, Academia Sinica
: Taipei, Taiwan, 10/1998
: L’Oreal Global Business Game Ranked NO.3 in Taiwan
: Taipei, Taiwan 03/2005
: PUBLICATIONS
: ,2008,How to see through fake offshore police. P.66~68 Money+
: 11th 2008
: , 2006: New Derivatives and Taiwan’s Nasty Elections: Prospects
: of Neuroscience, Politics and Finance. In Preparation.
: . 2003: RMB Revaluation and Taiwan’s Industry: Effect and
: Options. Tonich Monthly Report, Sep.,
: SPECIAL MEMBERSHIP
: American Chamber of Commerce in Taipei-Young Professional of Asset Management
: Member
: LICENSES
: Senior Securities Specialist
: Investment-oriented insurance representative
: FAMILY MEMBERS RELATED JOB
: BROTHER
: Senior Officer
: Taipei Economic and Culture Representative Office (2001~)
: BROTHER Ph. D in Environment Computer Science, JHU
: Part-Time work in NASA, IBM Super computer center (20
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