[請益] 英文自傳請益~

看板Salary (工作職場)作者 (come true)時間13年前 (2012/04/16 22:48), 編輯推噓3(306)
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想請大家幫我看看我的英文自傳 因為應徵公司的履歷表上只有約14~15行 所以我的自傳不多 應屆畢業生 應徵財務人員 以下是我的自傳 I am Mei. After graduating from Aletheia University, I applied for a master of economics in Ming Chuan University. My thesis examined the relationship between a firm size and R&D performance by utilizing Metafrontier model; and further, I adopted the Network DEA to provide managerial insight for enhancing performance. In terms of certificate received, I have got 7 financial professional credentials and scored 680 in the TOEIC exam since I studied in the university. Therefore, improving my foreign language competence will be regarded as one of my primary goals. When serving as an professor's assistant in graduate school, I learned a sense of responsibility toward students, above all, those affairs of students relative to their term grade are required more careful. Due to this acquirement, I must ensure that client rights and interests will be my top priority.Besides, since I often had to think about supervisor’s requests in advance,the position allowed me to enhance not only aggressive attitude but also problem solving ability. 最後會再加上幾句結語 請版友幫忙修改 感謝! -- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.34.153.49 ※ 編輯: adgh 來自: 114.34.153.49 (04/15 16:49) ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ※ 轉錄者: adgh (114.34.153.49), 時間: 04/16/2012 22:48:13 ※ 編輯: adgh 來自: 114.34.153.49 (04/16 22:49)

04/16 23:15, , 1F
第一句何不改成I'm Mei
04/16 23:15, 1F

04/16 23:19, , 2F
恩 用My name is 的開頭比較像學生在介紹
04/16 23:19, 2F

04/16 23:40, , 3F
感謝!!
04/16 23:40, 3F

04/17 00:38, , 4F
寫得很好耶~覺得看過去很通暢
04/17 00:38, 4F
※ 編輯: adgh 來自: 114.34.153.49 (04/17 01:22)

04/17 01:23, , 5F
第一句已修改!
04/17 01:23, 5F

04/17 10:54, , 6F
學姐給推!另外,雖然我分數多你200,可是靠自己
04/17 10:54, 6F

04/17 10:55, , 7F
不翻資料應該寫不出你這種自我介紹XD
04/17 10:55, 7F

04/17 12:27, , 8F
其實我的英文自傳還是蠻多要修改的QQ 而且也是參照很多文章
04/17 12:27, 8F

04/17 12:27, , 9F
但是還是有很多地方是中文式翻譯 得再修改才行! QQ
04/17 12:27, 9F
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