[請益] 新鮮人中英文自傳求批(國貿、行銷)

看板Salary (工作職場)作者時間13年前 (2013/03/04 01:05), 編輯推噓9(905)
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這是我寫的第一份自傳,參考了很多網路意見。 想面面俱到,甚麼都寫,也怕流於瑣碎。 也覺得身為一個甚麼工作經驗或顯赫經歷的新鮮人,寫自傳時不免顯著單薄。 希望板上先進們不吝指教!!謝謝!! 這是我放在人力銀行的中英文自傳,目前沒有針對特定公司寫的特製自傳和履歷。 您好: 我在古都台南長大,畢業後移居XX市與家人同住。畢業於XX大學行銷學系。我的專長是 商業英文、韓語、行銷企劃及提案。在大學四年中,因為對語言滿懷興趣,自我要求,多 益成績達到870分,畢業後也不斷精進韓語能力,考取TOPIK測驗4級。在學期間,除了參 加XXXXX商業提案比賽,進到決賽階段外,也曾行旅韓國忠南大學,作為交換學生。這顯 示我是一個對人際交流具有充分熱情,更樂於充實專業智識的人。 我喜歡充滿挑戰的生活,亦熱愛團隊工作。在學期間,商管課程中有許多組隊合作的課程 及作業,我們甚至也組團去參加比賽。身為隊長的我,在比賽過程中學到如何使團隊夥伴 為我所用,達成團隊目標。最後進入決賽前,大家捨棄休假及睡眠時間,全心地分頭為團 隊的企畫案蒐資、製作文檔、練習簡報流程,真的非常過癮、滿足! 我相當細膩、有耐心、也喜歡觀察人。在韓國遊學期間,我的班上有來自二十幾個不同國 家的同學。很高興能與不同背景的人交朋友,也覺得驚歎,發現截然不同的文化背景竟能 激盪出彼此這麼多的靈感!我也相當熱心、樂於給他人協助。我曾當過五個在台外籍生的 中文老師,並在周末做為他們的嚮導,帶他們認識美好的台灣。 國外業務、國貿人員、行銷企畫等都是我非常感興趣的工作。希望能結合我的語言能力、 學校所學及對工作的熱忱,為貴公司貢獻一己之力。 Dear Sir or Madam: Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to browse through my autobiography. I am XXXXXXX, grew up in Tainan and now live in Hsinchu city with my family. I am an optimistic, well-organized and dynamic person, so I am always pursuing a challenging, professional and chromatic career! Furthermore, I always emphasize on team work, and take group achievement in the first place. I graduated from XXXXXXXXX University in XXXXXXXX city and majored in marketing. My major had plenty of opportunities for students to work as a team, which had trained me more cooperative and let me get used to doing well in team works. I have led our team to the final in XXXXXXX business project competition, however which was forced to ended up with our member's studying abroad, including me. I had really a wonderful two-month in chung-nam University with my foreign friends. As an international student there, I had classes with classmates from more 20 countries. We all got along well with each others. Some of them from Japan, China and Korea even came to Taiwan to visit me few months later. I enjoyed all the international experiences really and even enthusiastic to it! That's why I am searching for a career which has the chances contacting with different people having diverse backgrounds. In my leisure time, I go swimming a lot, and I really love learning languages. Sport makes me relax and is my best way to relieve myself; Learning makes feel like recharging myself with those fascinating knowledge. I am learning Japanese and Spanish recently. Also, I am planning to take the advanced level TOPIK this year. Wholehearted to the position, I have the expectation to dig deeper in the professional knowledge, and elevate my ability of foreign languages. And I believe I am all ready for the upcoming challenges. I would appreciate your time in reviewing my autobiography and enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for an interview.   Sincerely yours,     XXXXXXXXX(name) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.195.20.149

03/04 01:10, , 1F
英文有很多很多的進步空間
03/04 01:10, 1F

03/04 01:18, , 2F
Very truly yours 是三小 是不是有漏字 文法也錯
03/04 01:18, 2F

03/04 01:26, , 3F
Very truly yours...好像真的有這用法
03/04 01:26, 3F
把一些明顯錯誤修改 然後把少見的結尾語換掉了 謝謝指正! ※ 編輯: doubleXD 來自: 123.195.20.149 (03/04 01:35)

03/04 02:32, , 4F
怎麼前半段英文空隔半型 後面變全型 我以為要填字=
03/04 02:32, 4F

03/04 08:04, , 5F
証照及學過課程條例式會比較好
03/04 08:04, 5F

03/04 09:44, , 6F
有無打工相關經驗?
03/04 09:44, 6F

03/04 12:58, , 7F
你要不要再加一份CV
03/04 12:58, 7F

03/04 13:34, , 8F
有些文法不能說你錯 但是描述的方式有點奇怪 外國人不會這
03/04 13:34, 8F

03/04 13:35, , 9F
樣講話 簡單說就是英文閱讀量還不錯
03/04 13:35, 9F

03/04 13:38, , 10F
夠= =
03/04 13:38, 10F
謝謝大家,我再找外國朋友幫我批改自傳好了..>"< 謝謝 ※ 編輯: doubleXD 來自: 123.195.20.149 (03/04 16:24)

03/04 19:49, , 11F
多益870英文怎寫成這樣?
03/04 19:49, 11F

03/04 19:52, , 12F
不過看得出來很上進
03/04 19:52, 12F

03/04 20:08, , 13F
Best Regards, 就好了
03/04 20:08, 13F

03/04 21:03, , 14F
22k有找
03/04 21:03, 14F
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