Re: [分享] 作文到底該怎麼寫？（一）第一段和文眼
看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者Rachelwoo (Rachelwoo)時間10年前 (2015/11/17 00:02)推噓10(10推 0噓 23→)留言33則, 12人參與討論串2/4 (看更多)
Hi, this is Rachel.
I hate to point it out, but besides the error, "an unique island" I pointed
out earlier today, there are still some errors in terms of grammar, and word
usage that I've found in those writing samples.
Here are a few:
1. While some people might pick jobs that are low-paid
but secure; others might prefer a riskier work with a higher pay.
2. As for me, since I am quite adventurous, if I have to pick a job,
: I would definitely pick one that comes with a higher salary.
: whatsoever.
3. A lot of people say that it is difficult to find a good supervisor
: in your work field nowadays.
4. In my opinion, a good supervisor should always possess a care to employees,
vision to the company, and high standards for his own work quality.
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※ 引述《dearamelia (Lia Hsu)》之銘言：
: 大家早安，我是SK2 的Lia！從今天開始，我要當個積極的分享者，還有一
: 個會早上起床的人！
: 所以今天呢，我決定來分享作文的主要架構--
: 其實作文中影響你的分數最大的部分，就是「作文中最重要的那四句話」，
: 也就是你第一段給出的Thesis Statement （主旨句/文眼）, 還有各段第一
: 句的 Topic Sentence （主題句，一段一句，共三句）。所以，這四句話，
: 到底該怎麼寫呢？整篇essay 中的Thesis Statement 和 Topic Sentence
: 該長什麼樣子呢？
: 首先，我們要從Thesis Statement 談起。Thesis Statement ，翻成中文是
: 主旨句，在我的課上呢，我通常稱它為文眼。
: 這樣的一個主旨句通常被擺放在第一段(Introduction) 的最後一句話，
: 它應該包含兩個要素：一、今天你寫作的題目；以及二、你對此題目的態
: 度。
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