[書信] 可以幫我看開發信內容嗎

看板intltrade (國際貿易)作者 (黑尼)時間14年前 (2011/10/04 21:21), 編輯推噓2(205)
留言7則, 4人參與, 最新討論串1/1
最近小妹我才剛應徵上國貿助理 寫開發信讓完全都沒接觸過這塊的我好緊張阿 可否幫我修改或哪裡需要改進的嗎 謝謝^^ Dear Sirs / Madams, 公司名 is a manufacturer of hydraulic cylinders. We have built up for 30 years and also the greatest supplier in Taiwan. We believe you will be satisfied with our professional quality if you are searching for a reliable supplier. Our products can be applied to many different types of industry such as agriculture machines, marine industries, trucking, auto hauling equipment, heavy duty cranes, hydraulic/pneumatic automatic series etc. If you want to know more information about our product, please visit our website at htty:// Thanks for your valuable time to read this letter. We are looking forward to establish a long-term& mutual beneficial partnership with you in early future. Your reply will be greatly appreciated Sincerely yours Hennie -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.232.108.249

10/04 22:15, , 1F
forward to establishing~我們家內容差不多~但我寄EDM
10/04 22:15, 1F

10/04 22:34, , 2F
EDM是甚麼?
10/04 22:34, 2F

10/04 22:38, , 3F
EDM好複雜噢XD
10/04 22:38, 3F

10/04 23:01, , 4F
我想國外客戶看到一堆文字應該會當垃圾信~EDM圖片參考囉
10/04 23:01, 4F

10/05 23:39, , 5F
EDM-->應該是指e-mail DM
10/05 23:39, 5F

10/06 12:29, , 6F
http:// 你打成 htty://
10/06 12:29, 6F

10/07 19:50, , 7F
好謝謝^^
10/07 19:50, 7F
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