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[橫行蟹譯]雍正案前對聯 2010.09.22

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心天之心而宵衣旰食 樂民之樂以和性怡情 雍正案前自惕 Heaven's care's my care; rise at dawn, sup at dusk. People's joy's my joy, mind at ease, soul at peace. One of Emperor Yongzheng's mottoes 原文二句各十一字，譯文各十一音節，字母加標點和空格也等長。 中秋吃月餅，字條變英文 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.135.55.143 ※ 編輯: usread 來自: 220.135.55.143 (09/22 13:59) ※ 編輯: usread 來自: 220.135.55.143 (09/22 14:00)
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09/22 16:49, , 1F
樂民之樂？
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※ 編輯: usread 來自: 220.135.55.143 (09/22 16:51) ※ 編輯: usread 來自: 220.135.55.143 (09/22 16:52)
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09/22 16:53, , 2F
謝謝LF,打成樂民划船了。已訂正：槳-->樂
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09/22 16:56, , 3F
[找碴] 我數來數去數不出十一字耶～ （逃）
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09/22 18:49, , 4F
[討論] 天的意義是否近似西方的神？如果是的話…
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Care what Gods care: rise at dawn, sup at dusk;
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09/22 18:50, , 6F
Cheer what People cheer:mind at ease, soul at peace
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09/22 18:53, , 7F
但是這樣心樂的動詞/名詞對仗顯不出，而且少一個音節:p
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09/22 18:54, , 8F
用 Heaven 因為單數會變 cares，又不工整…
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09/22 18:59, , 9F
用 Dieties 可以過關嗎？ Care what Dieties care...
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09/22 19:02, , 10F
或 care god's care; cheer men's cheer （9字但缺女生
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09/22 19:04, , 11F
但是變成 333 對仗而非 414（越想越複雜 XD
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09/22 19:17, , 12F
Care heaven's care and rise early, sup late
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09/22 19:18, , 13F
Cheer people's cheer to ease mind, sooth soul
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09/22 19:20, , 14F
還死在 early 這個字是兩音節上面...
09/22 19:20, 14F
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09/22 19:49, , 15F
中文差,英文爛,現在連數學都不好
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09/22 19:50, , 16F
大概月餅吃太多～～～留著做證據，九竟數成十一！！
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09/22 19:51, , 17F
忽想到 rise 是否該用 dress? 宵衣
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09/22 19:55, , 18F
soothe. early 只勉強想到一個 soon是單音節
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09/22 19:56, , 19F
或 care god's care and rise early, sup late
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09/22 19:57, , 20F
或 Care heaven's care; rise early, sup late.
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09/22 22:23, , 21F
「心天之心而宵衣旰食」，讀來似乎有點「天行健，君子以自
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強不息」的味道。以天為法，努力不懈。
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09/22 22:27, , 23F
Heaven's way's my way?
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09/22 22:29, , 24F
月餅吃太多～難怪「傳位十四子」寫成「傳位于四子」XD
09/22 22:29, 24F
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09/22 22:33, , 25F
heaven's way's my way, people's joy's my joy 工整啊
09/22 22:33, 25F
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09/22 22:33, , 26F
不過我也不敢說我的解讀正確，大家討論討論罷了
09/22 22:33, 26F
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09/22 22:41, , 27F
天行健很有道理啊,上解.
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09/22 22:47, , 28F
阿就是在咬文嚼字；第一個心是動詞，之心是名詞 XD
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09/22 22:48, , 29F
傳位于八子的話，要叫他們王一、王二、王三...
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09/22 22:55, , 30F
Act in Heaven's act, Joy in People's joy (joy可當動詞)
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Enact in Heaven's act, Enjoy in People's joy
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Act "on"
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介系詞全去:(En)Act Heaven's act, (En)Joy People's joy
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09/22 23:30, , 34F
那就Obey Heaven's will/path
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09/22 23:34, , 35F
跟隨…的腳步不同於順從…的旨意 XD
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09/22 23:47, , 36F
因為"心天之心" -> act heaven't act 有點怪
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09/22 23:48, , 37F
能不能Heart with the heavens... Joy with the people
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09/22 23:50, , 38F
amorch大heaven's way's my way不錯呀
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act有點怪嗎? 那就 Walk Heaven's walk
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09/23 00:17, , 40F
⊕ Heaven's ⊕
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tengharold大，那是usread大譯的呀///>>>
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哎呀看太快 〒△〒
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