Re: [請益] 簡單的自我介紹有無問題

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (Sanctuary)時間14年前 (2010/11/18 18:48), 編輯推噓1(102)
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: 明天應徵工作準備的一段簡單英文自我介紹 : 因為很久沒用英文了,程度實在很低落,奮戰幾小時後擠出一點東西 : Hi, I am 王小明, twenty-five years old. Good morning everyone. My name is Wang ... : There are four people in my family, including my parents, young brother, and : me. : My father is a serious worker, he very care about our family. : 我父親是一位認真的上班族,他很照顧家庭 : My mother is both a housewife and a hairdresser. : 母親是一位家庭主婦,也是一個美容師 : And my brother, he is looking for a job like me. : 我弟弟跟我一樣在找工作 建議以上戶口調查全部刪掉。 : I graduated from college last year. : 去年畢業 I graduated from Harvard University last year. 大學名字不講出來等於白說。 : When I in college , I have two years of work experience. : 大學時有兩年的打工經驗 I had two years of part-time work experiences while in college. : I was a waiter in a restaurant. : 在餐廳當過服務生 I used to work in a restaurant as a waiting staff. : The other work was a salesman to sold computer, and I can repair item. : 另一個是在電腦公司賣電腦,也會幫忙修理 Because I am a qualified technician of computer hardwares, I also worked in a local computer shop at one point. : My great interest are surfing the internet and playing video games. : 我的興趣是上網跟打電動 My favorite activities in leisure time are surfing the Internet and playing video games. (你確定要說你的興趣是打電動?) : I lean tings quickly and I am earnest in my work, which are both my advantage. : 我的優點是學習力強跟工作認真 I take all my assignments seriously and am able to pick up new skills in a short time. : I will continue to study and increase my professional skills. : 我會持續的進修並加強我的專業技能 這句其實沒啥實際意義。 : If I have a chance to earn this position, I will do my best in the future. : 如果有機會我能撐取到這職務,我會盡我全力 其實這句也.... 就跟大部分台灣年輕人的自傳一樣,這一篇沒有提到你過去曾有的輝煌經歷。也 看不出來你會什麼東西。 ※ 編輯: hoch 來自: 111.248.4.95 (11/18 21:25)

11/18 22:21, , 1F
謝謝大大的鞭策
11/18 22:21, 1F

11/19 01:15, , 2F
其實h大英文應該寫簡單一點,原po英語程度不佳,應該
11/19 01:15, 2F

11/19 01:16, , 3F
也不會用到waitstaff這種字 :)
11/19 01:16, 3F
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