[請益] 簡單的自我介紹有無問題

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (佛心來的)時間14年前 (2010/11/18 15:55), 編輯推噓0(000)
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明天應徵工作準備的一段簡單英文自我介紹 因為很久沒用英文了,程度實在很低落,奮戰幾小時後擠出一點東西 我竟量以簡單的句子表達,請幫我看看有無需要修改的地方 附上中文是我想表達的意思,麻煩各位鞭小力點 Hi, I am 王小明, twenty-five years old. There are four people in my family, including my parents, young brother, and me. My father is a serious worker, he very care about our family. 我父親是一位認真的上班族,他很照顧家庭 My mother is both a housewife and a hairdresser. 母親是一位家庭主婦,也是一個美容師 And my brother, he is looking for a job like me. 我弟弟跟我一樣在找工作 I graduated from college last year. 去年畢業 When I in college , I have two years of work experience. 大學時有兩年的打工經驗 I was a waiter in a restaurant. 在餐廳當過服務生 The other work was a salesman to sold computer, and I can repair item. 另一個是在電腦公司賣電腦,也會幫忙修理 My great interest are surfing the internet and playing video games. 我的興趣是上網跟打電動 I lean tings quickly and I am earnest in my work, which are both my advantage. 我的優點是學習力強跟工作認真 I will continue to study and increase my professional skills. 我會持續的進修並加強我的專業技能 If I have a chance to earn this position, I will do my best in the future. 如果有機會我能撐取到這職務,我會盡我全力 Thanks for your listening! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 122.100.98.68
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