[寫作] AA#104篇攻擊點一問
"Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less
than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped
gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost
of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50% and thereby
achieve a balanced town budget.”
攻擊點之一為:
There is no causal relationship between the development of the employees'
health and the provision of a well-equipped gym.
想請問一下
作者認為興建體育館應該可以減少保險的成本
雖然文中並沒有明確提到
但這應該就表示作者認為"體育館建立後 員工會去那運動"
所以才會減少保險成本
但這並不一定 因為員工不一定會去體育館運動
所以不知道上述攻擊點可不可以說成
"gratuitous assumption"
因為之前補習沒補到AWA 所以一切都得靠自己摸索 Orz
請問一下這樣的思路對嗎?
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