Re: [寫作班]第二週 找工作計劃 nanochen

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (小馬兒要美夢成真^Q^)時間17年前 (2007/10/26 12:33), 編輯推噓3(300)
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※ 引述《nanochen (English)》之銘言: : My plan for finding a job ---Your background--- : I am currently a 5th year Ph. D. student and expect to : graduate next May. It is about time for me to find a job. ---Your expectation for a job : Even I already interviewed with several companies, I am : still interested in being a postdoctoral researcher in : a university after graduation. : I would like to go to some areas which are different from ^^^^^^^^^^ what areas? please be more specific.. : what I am working during my Ph.D. thesis. It would be : advantageous if I can expand my research areas. Joining ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ again. plz specify "what"do you do now and plan to do "what" in the future so that's why you have to make "what" plan : a bigger group would be a preferred choice for me. --Your plan for a job--- : The things I need to do are to prepare my CV, to ask for : the recommendation letters, and to practice my talks. ^^^^^^^^ what talk? : Time seems not enough and I have to hurry. Hope I can get ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Time is fleeting so I need to arrange my time more effetviely. : an ideal position. Chinese in the following: 親愛的版友你好: 以下是小小建議,僅供參考。 這篇作文的文法與文字都很流暢, 但是讀不出明確的"計畫細節"是什麼,以及"為何"要做這些計畫 My "plan" for finding a "job" 你想要的找的"job"是什麼呢? 可以提供更多細節嗎? 為了找這份工作要如何"finding"? 而你為了找到這個"job"所需要做的"plan"又是什麼呢? 除了1. CV ,2. recommendation letter ,3.talk (什麼talk?工作的溝通能力嗎?) 還有其他嗎? 這個部分會是這篇文章最主要的重點,請多加描述。 大家好認真學英文~ 我也要加加油 加油 ^__^ -- 我愛唱歌 我用歌聲和吉他表達情感 我唱過的哪一首歌 曾感動過你嗎 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.171.138.49 ※ 編輯: november22 來自: 218.171.138.49 (10/26 12:36)

10/26 22:57, , 1F
plz specify to "what" you do now 這句話有點問題...
10/26 22:57, 1F
※ 編輯: november22 來自: 218.171.138.49 (10/26 23:53)

10/26 23:54, , 2F
謝謝指證~我自己也覺得怪怪的~動詞後面用的不太對^^"
10/26 23:54, 2F

10/27 10:39, , 3F
非常感謝...自己想想的確有蠻多地方不太清楚的
10/27 10:39, 3F
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