Re: [寫作班]第二週 找工作計劃 nanochen
※ 引述《nanochen (English)》之銘言：
: My plan for finding a job
: I am currently a 5th year Ph. D. student and expect to
^^^正式一點的文件建議用 fifth
: graduate next May. It is about time for me to find a job.
: Even I already interviewed with several companies, I am
1.你想表達的是Even though吧？
2.interview當主動型態的時候，表示你是主考官。
而且用了already，時態上最好是完成式。
所以建議改為
Even though I have already been interviewed for several jobs..
: still interested in being a postdoctoral researcher in
: a university after graduation.
: I would like to go to some areas which are different from
^^ explore更好 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ apart from 即可
: what I am working during my Ph.D. thesis. It would be
^^^^^^這是碩論，博論多用dissertation
: advantageous if I can expand my research areas. Joining
: a bigger group would be a preferred choice for me.
^^^^^ What kind of group? Commercial, technological, or academic?
: The things I need to do are to prepare my CV, to ask for
: the recommendation letters, and to practice my talks.
^^^^^^ 這是指表達能力嗎？
or communication skills?
: Time seems not enough and I have to hurry. Hope I can get
^^^^^^^^^^ 可用 insufficient
: an ideal position.
前面幾位版友的建議沒錯，有些地方確實可以寫得更明確一些。
有時只要加上一兩個形容詞就可以達成的:)
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