Re: [寫作班]第二週英文寫作計畫 sakuravita
看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者brendonfish (fish)時間17年前 (2007/11/06 11:17)推噓0(0推 0噓 0→)留言0則, 0人參與討論串2/3 (看更多)
※ 引述《sakuravita ()》之銘言:
:
: have acquaintance with a field of skill, we need to retrieve its source. It
^^^^ ^^^
a skill in certain field? source 是指?
: helps us to be more familiar with the usage of words, such as collocation. In
: the meantime, reading can also increase our lexicon, which is useful in
^^^^似乎沒有時間關係 ^^^^^ enrich?
用 In addition 會不會比較好?
: writing. If one has a fundamental background of reading, one can writes
^^^ ^^ in
要 proficient writing,
strong background 也許比較夠
: proficiently.
: Therefore, my plan of improving English writing is as follows: first,
: reading reference books of writing, such as Style, Line by Line; and also
^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^sentence pattern
reference book 比較像是字典之類的工具書, 不太適合用讀的
: research guiding books, such as Writing Research Paper, MLA Handbook. These
^, and
: books offer me a direction how to write a good composition; and most important
^^direction of ^^^composition 不可數
: of all, how to write a better thesis. Second, writing as possible as
: I can. I joined the writing group on BBS, and also audited a writing class in
^^also 可省略
: campus. In these participations, I can push myself to write. Moreover, there
^^^
participation 不可數,用 By making these efforts 如何呢?
: there are professionals, teacher and peers to cooperate with. In their assistance
^^^^^there 是指?
: In their assistance and guidance, I can no more be blind to my own mistakes of writing.
^^with ^^about
: (請多多指教,謝謝!)
從整體來看,
在第一段的第一句,你點出了你的寫作計畫有讀跟寫兩個部分。下一句如果能承接
說明計畫中讀跟寫該如何相輔相成,把計畫的架構勾勒出來,會方便下一段進一步
描述計畫細節。
我覺得你第一句以後有點不是在說明計畫,反而在解釋為什麼要先讀再寫了。
給你參考,祝你計畫成功
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