Re: [寫作班]第二週英文寫作計畫 sakuravita
※ 引述《sakuravita ()》之銘言：
: Plan of improving my English writing skill
: To improve English writing skill needs two key elements: reading and
^^^^^ 用requires更漂亮。
: writing. Reading is essential for being the source of writing. When we want to
這一句其實這樣表達比較好：
Reading is the foundation of writing.
"essential for being..."這樣的用法我沒有看過。
: have acquaintance with a field of skill, we need to retrieve its source. It
acquaint的用法應該是：
When we want ot acquaint ourselves with...
retrieve是「重新獲得」的意思，似乎不合這裡的文意。
另外，這句的its代替了什麼？field of skill嗎？
可是要怎麼從技術領域的來源重新獲得東西？
這句的邏輯不太通順喔。
: helps us to be more familiar with the usage of words, such as collocation. In
: the meantime, reading can also increase our lexicon, which is useful in
^^^^^^^^^^^^^這裡用furthermore, besides之類的字應該更好
lexicon是指某個領域的全部詞彙或術語，
其實這邊應該用vocabulary
: writing. If one has a fundamental background of reading, one can writes
^^^^^^^^^
助動詞後不用變化喔
: proficiently.
: Therefore, my plan of improving English writing is as follows: first,
: reading reference books of writing, such as Style, Line by Line; and also
: research guiding books, such as Writing Research Paper, MLA Handbook. These
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 可以直接用research guides
: books offer me a direction how to write a good composition; and most important
^^^要加of ^^逗點即可
: of all, how to write a better thesis. Second, writing as possible as
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
這樣講很怪，我會說：
Second, writing as much as possible.
: I can. I joined the writing group on BBS, and also audited a writing class in
這兩句的時態上用現在式，甚至是現在進行式，會不會比較好？
: campus. In these participations, I can push myself to write. Moreover, there
^^^^用urge更好。
: are professionals, teacher and peers to cooperate with. In their assistance
: and guidance, I can no more be blind to my own mistakes of writing.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^你想表達的是overlook這個字嗎？
"I won't overlook my mistakes of writing"?
: （請多多指教，謝謝！）
加油～
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