[寫作班]第五禮拜題目-颱風........KFSFAT

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耶我搶頭香先寫完喔,版主要幫獎勵一下 有關於這個主題,其實我覺得有很多方向可以寫,像我就有想到兩個。 第一是寫關於颱風來時,應該準備哪些東西,例如食物,收音機..等等。 另外一個是想到颱風來時可能發生的災害以及後續影響。 不過我選擇第二個,寫的時候發現並不是像我想像的那麼容易,所以看起來可能會有點 boring, 麻煩大家欣賞了 The influences of the typhoons when they are coming Even though millions of dollars are spent each year on predicting typhoons, the disasters continue to make headline news. When the typhoon is approaching, even after it is away from here, the calamity is not as simple as what we thought. While the typhoon is coming, first, as a result of heavy rain, a lot of the buildings are toppled, the houses are buried because of the mudslides, as well as the major roads are blocked with rubbles in the countryside of the city. Second, crops, vegetables, everything about agricultures, the productions decrease very much. The price is going to become higher. Finally, the governments need to spend much money on rescuing, repairing the roads, and so on. All the costs cause the economic condition to go worse. (最後一句可以用未來式寫成這樣嗎? The economic condition is going to be worse.) Although we are able to predict the typhoon while it is approaching, its influence still strikes our country every time. All kind of the architectures and the traffic roads are destroyed, the productions of the agricultures are decay, the economy becomes worse. These are all bad influences when the typhoon is coming. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.62.186.136 ※ 編輯: kfsfat 來自: 61.62.186.136 (11/29 11:49) ※ 編輯: kfsfat 來自: 61.62.186.136 (11/29 11:55) ※ 編輯: kfsfat 來自: 61.62.186.136 (11/29 11:57) ※ 編輯: kfsfat 來自: 61.62.186.136 (11/29 23:24)
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