[寫作班]azure0116, Christmas

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I began to remember the old memory about my first love. Acctually she didnt love me as I love her. Like my father said," the things in the world you can't acquire always tempt you most."I guess it's a kind of the human natures. In 2000, December 24, I was the second grade of my junior high school. There's a beautiful girl sat in front of me,I having been caring for her for months. Since December 24 was the last chace for me to ask her out, I decided that I must try my atmost to ask for dating her. At the moon break finally I courageously asked her out. She accept my invitation. At the moment I felt an overwhelming joy first appeared in my life. We met at the Taipei MRT station first. I took her to my favorite restaurant. Then we went to 淡水 to enjoy the beauteos sunset. I really knew of your kindness because seeing you bought a 愛心鉛筆. We had a good time at that day. When I said good bye to her in my mind I decided to ask her out again, fantasizing that in the process of time we may become a couple. Unluckily, fortune doesnt smiles on me. She didnt care for me as I did. We could only be friend. The thing intenses my suffering was our photographic momery on Cristmas. Although many years passed by, I still missed the girl. I was ambivalent about a loveless lover on every Christmas,missing her terribly, remembering her cruelty, thinking about that she flashed the first smile at me in my life. *---------------------- 以下為疑惑^^ 有些逗號+動名詞是用分詞構句@@ 不知道用的對不對! (約xxx出來只能用 ask XX out 嗎?) 愛心鉛筆不知道怎麼拼 (那種台北車站附近路上一直叫你買的) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.142.228.202